Reviews for One Thing He Could Never Forgive
Validate0 chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
very sad, but i loved it!
ayumu smile chapter 1 . 1/11/2011
i think this should be m-rated! the story makes me cry! It's really good though! -/-
Darthrose chapter 1 . 3/20/2010
Truth be told, I'm not really a fan of yaoi, but was interested when I read the title.

The story's good with only a few gramatical errors, really minor so don't worry about it. But I would suggest that you reread your story a few times try and catch those little words.

Oh and I could actually feel my face change from wide eyed shock, to smiling like an idiot, to having my mouth hang ajar and finally feeling my face (well, I don't know how to put this) turn into sad mode at the ending.

This is a really good story, so keep it up.
K8BNimble chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
Beautiful story even if sad. Nicely done.