|Reviews for One Small Step|
| Guest chapter 6 . 2/3/2015
Thanks for the good word pictures. I can just see Jim and Spock tied to that tree! I really enjoy your sense of humor - so great to have stories that bring a laugh or a smile.
Glad you made another Trek fan. Hope "Protector" keeps writing Trek stories. Tell her I said "Welcome aboard".
| MoonlightMystery13.3 chapter 2 . 10/9/2014
This is amazing. The only thing I would be careful about in the future is your use of pronouns: When you say 'he' it's not always clear who you're talking about. But this is wonderful. You really portrayed the characters so well that I almost expect to find this scene on Netflix somewhere. Keep writing!
| Guest chapter 6 . 5/16/2014
It's not Spocks fault that the wind blew his hat off :(
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/16/2014
Love it so much! Please write more!
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/16/2014
| ThatSassyCaptain chapter 6 . 8/24/2013
"You stubborn space elf" XD
This is fantastic. I love it.
| sleipnirfenris chapter 6 . 6/27/2013
you get their relationship spot on every time. I can just see them bickering. Amazing!
| sleipnirfenris chapter 4 . 6/27/2013
wow this turned alarmingly dark! never saw it coming.
| sleipnirfenris chapter 3 . 6/27/2013
This was genius! I smiled the entire time 3
| sleipnirfenris chapter 1 . 6/27/2013
lovely description of illness without becoming over dramatic (as I, myself, am want to do). XD
| sami1010220 chapter 6 . 4/9/2013
Lol, great ending to a great fic. I didn't expect it to end so lightheartedly, but I'm glad it did.
| Guest chapter 6 . 1/20/2013
More good stories. I especially liked the drunken Kirk.
| ZenaraTheDragon chapter 6 . 12/28/2012
oh...wow. just...wow. in a good way! in a very good way!
| Book girl fan chapter 6 . 12/10/2012
That is just hilarious! What better way could there be to end a mission?
| Surreptitious Chi X chapter 6 . 11/16/2012
Adorable. The usual Star Trek ridiculous mission (and outcome) with delicious fluff attached.