|Reviews for One Small Step|
| mckydstarlight chapter 6 . 7/6
That made me happy. I love them so much.
| mckydstarlight chapter 5 . 7/6
*has more feelings
| mckydstarlight chapter 4 . 7/6
Ow ow ow ow ow.
| mckydstarlight chapter 3 . 7/6
Jim Kirk. Bless him.
| bee.zippy chapter 6 . 5/3
| atymer chapter 6 . 4/22
| atymer chapter 4 . 4/22
I think a lot of disaster workers here these sounds throughout their lives. The ones they could not save. It is a reminder that life is precious.
| atymer chapter 3 . 4/22
| Dalamanza chapter 6 . 1/9
I actually love your stories
| cytpotter chapter 6 . 9/29/2016
:D Yup enjoyed this very much! Love those 5 and ones! Great Job! Thanks for sharing!
| Guest chapter 6 . 2/3/2015
Thanks for the good word pictures. I can just see Jim and Spock tied to that tree! I really enjoy your sense of humor - so great to have stories that bring a laugh or a smile.
Glad you made another Trek fan. Hope "Protector" keeps writing Trek stories. Tell her I said "Welcome aboard".
| MoonlightMystery13.3 chapter 2 . 10/9/2014
This is amazing. The only thing I would be careful about in the future is your use of pronouns: When you say 'he' it's not always clear who you're talking about. But this is wonderful. You really portrayed the characters so well that I almost expect to find this scene on Netflix somewhere. Keep writing!
| Guest chapter 6 . 5/16/2014
It's not Spocks fault that the wind blew his hat off :(
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/16/2014
Love it so much! Please write more!
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/16/2014