|Reviews for An Introduction to Swirl and Daisy|
| dmoviefan chapter 41 . 1/21
Loved this chapter!
I really liked Edward's romantic declaration regarding the differences between him and Romeo. Edward is so swoon worthy :)
The senior prank was awesome.
The First Time was very sweet and romantic. I like that it mirror Edward's fantasy of their first time in so many ways with the white dress, etc.
I also liked that you associated Bella's passage into womanhood with making a difficult, but necessary decision. This chapter was brilliant!
| 2lulu2 chapter 34 . 1/21
Haha so awesome. I adore their relationship.
| NKubie chapter 39 . 1/20
I'm not sure I'm ready for the next chapter. This one was a doozie! At least I finally have internet back and can actually read them.
Wow, that was one can of crazy that Bella opened up. Or maybe Edward opened it. Whatever. Still...
Bottom line, though, I'm sooooo glad it's all out in the open. I think this time apart will be good for them. I'm not worried that they won't be together in the end, so I can deal.
| 2lulu2 chapter 30 . 1/20
Lol, every chapter I just laugh and laugh! I'm considering asking my husband to let me read this to him. It's just so amazing. I love how you write the parents too especially.
| Postapocalypticdepository chapter 41 . 1/20
Great and unexpected.
| Postapocalypticdepository chapter 39 . 1/20
I honestly didn't this chapter going in this direction.
I wonder whether Bella's going to be the one to propose now.
| 2lulu2 chapter 36 . 1/20
Oh my gosh how I've missed this story!
| Ana chapter 41 . 1/20
Please update. I'm dying here.
| ginnypotter1596 chapter 6 . 1/19
I feel like such a dick! I am soooo sorry! I just went on your profile and there was a Harry Potter story. Well, whatev, as you can tell, I am a dedicated Harry Potter fan. Oops, ha he.
| ginnypotter1596 chapter 5 . 1/19
Love ze story mademoiselle. However, hate you. Lord of ze Rings can suck my Richard Johnson.(if I had one) (Tehe, dick penis) Anywhore, I am highly offended by your dishing of my beloved Harry Potter. That's why currently, there are 671k hp fanfics, and only 50.7k LotR fanfics on this net. Everyone likes Harry Potter better than Lord of the Rings. So, as previously mentioned, suck it. (Love the story doe)
| ginnypotter1596 chapter 2 . 1/19
9/13/01... 9/11/01... just a thought about the timing of this story.
| Wardrob07 chapter 41 . 1/19
Amazing! Can't wait for more :)
| Wardrob07 chapter 39 . 1/19
Oh my, what a mess... It started out beautifully, his plan was amazing but then Bella had to mess things up... She should(!) have told him earlier, I mean it must have hurt his feelings a lot... Oh well...
| Guest chapter 36 . 1/18
I'm intrigued by Carmen, I hope she will be more in the story later
| dmoviefan chapter 40 . 1/18
You did such a great job making Mrs. Evans a lovable character that it was really easy to sympathize with Edward and Bella's sense of loss.
Highlights for me were 1. Edward the love doctor (LOL!), 2. Carlisle's talk with Bella about getting through the loss as a family, and 3. the vows.
Losing a beloved character is hard, but I'm glad it brought Edward and Bella closer together.