Reviews for These Young Lions
mworth1019 chapter 3 . 7/1
Really cute story enjoyed it. Wish for a sequel
MuggleCreator chapter 3 . 5/7
Eeeeeeeeeeee!
Perrrrfect. :D
TheAdventuresJustBeginning chapter 3 . 8/21/2015
This was so lovely :) great job!
AnoGal chapter 3 . 4/12/2015
"I'm from Cheshire" hilarious line!

I absolutely LOVED this story, I could definitely imagine a sequel to it.

Very well written, it made me feel all their emotions perfectly. Well done!
SiriuslyMoonlight chapter 3 . 2/1/2013
Awesome!
Sure, HP wouldn't have been as enthralling as it is, has this been Rowling's plot, but it feels so right, so good...
Well, I loved it of course
gobalbucs chapter 3 . 6/13/2012
Wow, this was AMAZING!

This was absolutely bloody brilliant! I love how you did this!

John was really cool and I really loved those two parts where Rem had Vernon by the neck with his werewolf strength XD Go Remmy!

This was very different from all the AUs where Sirius doesn't get caught and I can only wish in my dreams that something like this has happened :/

Anyway, great job!
Someone aka Me chapter 2 . 12/16/2011
I was perusing my favorites today, and I came across this lovely story, and now that I've reread it, I decided to rereview. The last time I read it was forever ago, and I have since learned to review properly :D

I still maintain that this is an excellent story, and it deserves far more reviews than it has, quite frankly. It's supremely well written – I think there was only one typo that I noticed (at some point during Remus's dialogue, I'm not sure which chapter, he makes a there/they're mistake, I believe it was). Other than that, though, it's grammatically sound. Not only that, though, it's just very well written – syntactically, word-choice-wise, all of that.

Honestly, there's a reason this is on my favorites list, and it's staying on there, even while I trim the list.

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mommyconk chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
I read this a while back at the games site and I hope I commented there but I just wanted to say that I just reread it and love it all over again.
TechNomaNcer28 chapter 3 . 6/14/2011
Oh gooood,this is one of the best everrrrr!I just can't help but smile constantly now!It's really well done,i just love it!
TechNomaNcer28 chapter 2 . 6/14/2011
Oh oh ohhhh!That was such a scary moment!But seriously,this is just so unique,i love how this is going,really,all of it!
TechNomaNcer28 chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
WOOOW!This is so wonderful,full of heart wrenching emotions and so much of ideas!Love it!
Cianhowah chapter 3 . 5/18/2011
I just found this fic and I absolutely loved it! It's really great and nice! Just wanted to let you know that it's great to still find fics of R/S even though it seems sometimes like the fandom is growing smaller and smaller since it's already been so long. So thanks for writing this one so recently :)
anotherbuskitten chapter 3 . 2/14/2011
'Mazing story. John is the nicest person ever and I really hate Dumbledore.
Someone aka Me chapter 3 . 2/12/2011
This story is excellent! I love it!

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Krysler chapter 3 . 2/7/2011
Perfectly lovely!
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