|Reviews for Harry Potter and The Head Master of Hogwarts|
| Clayva chapter 1 . 9/17/2013
Fourth chapter from the end of the chapter indicates that it is Harry's Birthday then without even one word, sentence or indicator you skip a whole month and it is the end of August and school starts on the following day. You need to correct that error as soon as you can.
| Winged Seer Wolf chapter 7 . 4/23/2013
You messed up on the years umbridge recieved. She recieved 250 years, not 325. That is the only mistake so far.
| Draco mudiliar chapter 20 . 3/16/2013
I was surpirsed for a sed when Hermione said Harry and Draco were in Love but again the twist happened...and that was good even though I will vote for them but I like them like this too...
I see another dark lord that mean we readers get to read your another fic which I am sure will be as interesting as this one was...
| Draco mudiliar chapter 8 . 3/16/2013
oh that was very touchy and sweet chapter...
| ILoveGeorgeEads chapter 20 . 3/11/2013
i loved loved knew it was Terry Boot.
| Guest chapter 20 . 12/14/2012
| ruth hammond chapter 20 . 12/7/2011
sneaky...good story...looking forward to the next one.
have to get some work done first so I am trying to keep from heading straight to the next
don't think that I am going to make it...as I head back to find it!
| ruth hammond chapter 8 . 12/4/2011
| ruth hammond chapter 4 . 12/3/2011
you have got to be Irish...no one else is as sneaky as we are! hehe
good chapter, you are doing an excellent job with the tension of your scenes.
on to the next chapter!
| Eris Potter-Charmed Child chapter 8 . 5/17/2011
| marmc chapter 13 . 12/18/2010
trying to figure out plot...then this BS slash, if you fagot lovers would pls state right up front your intentions to gross us out with your fagot dreams, it would save people much time and puking, very sick!
| Mike.Delphi chapter 11 . 9/2/2010
Has someone been reading the Sunrunners saga books?
| eclispe chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
wrong- "Molly" Harry called.
right- "Molly," Harry called.
whats with the lack of commas?
| the-omnomnom-phenomenon chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
I got to the end of this chapter and I said to myself
"The former story sounds way to interesting to pass up"
ON TO THE PREQUEL!
Or whatever it's called!
| Cerulean Night chapter 20 . 6/28/2010
Excellent :D I'm rather looking forward to part three.