|Reviews for Mistake|
| rangernstephfan chapter 2 . 3/23/2010
I really like the story. I can't wait to find out if Bella went through with the wedding. Is she going to show up at one of his gigs or is he going to go home? I'm hoping she shows up to one of his shows. Very good start to the makings of a great story. Can't wait to see how you continue.
| wrighthangal chapter 2 . 3/23/2010
I am pleasantly expecting an update soon.
| MaryElizabeth23 chapter 1 . 3/11/2010
Ok...I've read. Are you planning on continuing with this? I liked it, I'm thinking edward is a tad bit pussy whipped...bella is a little um...how do I say this...ignorant to the obvious. Playing the bestfriend card has to suck...I really wish you would have gone more into the lovin'...m...lemons are hot. If u did continue where would u have him go? And was it jake that she is engaged to or was it someone else...I think you need to harden edward a little. I DO NOT think you should have bella marry someone else. If there is one way to kill a fic..that would be the way having the tables turned would be a great way to move this story forward, you don't read many stories when its bella chasing after edward. Have him go whereever...and have her realize and have her find him but have him make her fight for it. *shrug* that's my advice. Great one shot...mary
| DennyRose chapter 1 . 1/5/2010