Reviews for Torrid
sasunaruislove chapter 24 . 7/20
I was hoping you will make Neji end up with Itachi, but I guess it will only extending the drama. Haha!

I like it; how you make all of them human with faults. Though I admit, you're quite rough with Sakura.

But, you know, I can see this is as reflection of canon. I mean, all the interaction, the relationship, it comes naturally. When I see the actual ending of the manga, it's just too.. unnatural. It didn't solve anything; so vague and forced. Ah, sorry for ramblings here.

You know what's my favorite line?
"You're still the wind."
It cracked my tears up. Heheh. Good job!
sapphire80 chapter 24 . 7/5
awwww sweet ending! that was quite ride, kinda sad to see it end but anymore would be too long I think, certainly won't object to a sequel of course cx Surprised and yet not that Sakura didn't end up crazy and put in some psych ward, you could have gone that way but I liked the way how things ended for her dispite everything, we all make mistakes and you never made her out to be truely bitchy/evil
sapphire80 chapter 16 . 7/4
grins gleefully xD I feel for her but yeah she dug herself in this hole and now she must lie in it, it was painfully stupid but I guess she was obessed, she is just short of being those crazy *if I can't have you no one will, raises knife* kind of stalkers
sapphire80 chapter 15 . 7/4
oh shit oh shit oh shit! lol so much drama and I could pratically hear cats hissing and snarling when Sasuke and Neji confronted each other, I felt like I transported back to school and I was part of the onlookers going oh no she didn't! and oooooh sick burn! while egging them on to fight xD
sapphire80 chapter 13 . 7/4
hisses yessss! so sad but so needed in Sasuke case... he is trying to go back to how things were and make things 'work' instead of change. So happy Naruto is staying firm! you just want to hug him for being so strong *wipes sappy tears* xD
sapphire80 chapter 9 . 7/4
faceplams hard, I just have no words for Sakura anymore, hurries to the next chapter
sapphire80 chapter 8 . 7/3
shakes head and pats Sakura's deluded head, damn this is painful and obvious, like does she hear herself when she thinks or talks about naruto and sasuke's relationship besides being blind
sapphire80 chapter 7 . 7/3
wow! this story has so much drama but its not to bad that I want to stop reading! I can't wait to see how all this ends up,... as for Neji while he coming off a tad overconfident in this chapter I can't fault his logic xD I can't stand what Sasuke is doing and continuing to do to Naruto and to some extent Sakura (thou you made her out to be a tad manipulative so you don't feel to sorry for her, if at all xD) Anyway I hope this is going the way I hope it is! Sasuke needs a good dose of jealousy and reality check, Naruto isn't a doormat and I hope Naruto doesn't continue being one soon!
shyd1 chapter 24 . 5/27
I loved this! What an awesome ride!
Guest chapter 24 . 4/30
Honestly, this is by far the best sasu-naru fanfic I've read , and I'm extremely happy that you completed it , thank you for taking so much time out of your life to give people like me so much excitement and happiness, thank you , and I almost forgot to mention , I don't know about my shitty english , but your english , no matter where your from or how old you are is freaking awesome , unlike most fanfic writers (_-)- :D
Guest chapter 9 . 4/27
Ugh Sakura is so pathetic
silvertonguedmaiden chapter 19 . 4/16
I'm officially in love with your writing style...
silvertonguedmaiden chapter 15 . 4/16
again...awesome... hyuuga bitch slap technique... that cracked me up
silvertonguedmaiden chapter 6 . 4/16
I've already told you before... but I need to say it once more... have you officially written any original stories... if not you should... you are really talented...
Kissme007 chapter 24 . 4/13
This was a beautiful story! I'm so glad I found this gem. Loved the way you write your characters. And the small scenes with multi layered meanings made me catch my breadth: In Paris, when Sasuke took Sakura there vis-a-vis when he went to see Naruto just highlighted the difference in his behaviour in the best possible way. Specially since it was observed from an outsider's point of view.

I really liked this story and I hope you write more. Also I have to say I came to adore Neji. Was so sad he couldn't get his own sun/ball of sunshine. I wonder if you would be interested in writing a Neji and Naruto story. This definitely gave me some ideas ;)

So now I'm off to reading more of your stories. I'll try and not make it into an all nighter but ... Anyway. Good job :)
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