Reviews for Torrid
Guest chapter 24 . 12/28/2022
maGNIFICENT I CANT GET OVER THIS
Tom Vilchez chapter 24 . 12/13/2022
Kill yourself, disgusting delusional fucked up virgin fag.
naruandsasu chapter 24 . 12/5/2022
hey xxx, i know it's been years since your fic has finished and i really can't count of how many times i've read it over the years. this is one of the narusasu fics i will always come back to. i just wanted you to know that your fic is so head of time. it perfectly fit taylor swift's illicit affairs. i listened to that song after reading your fic and it tripled the pain the angst. i hope you're doing well right now, you are and will always be a treasure in this fandom. love lost!
apiegohome chapter 24 . 10/10/2022
Okay. I’m having a lot of feelings about this, and I realise it’s been 10 years since you finished this and you might not even see this comment but I hope you doooo. This fic was just epic. I laughed, I cried, I flat out screamed in some places. Made inhuman fangirl noises — the absolute works. This was a total roller coaster! In the best of ways! The plot was just insanely engaging, and that character development!? Holy shit! Socjxfhiefhbswhq! When I first started reading I was like ‘nooo Naruto stand up for yourself’ and by the end there when he actually did I was speechless because omg did they both grow as people and were so multi-faceted, and yes, Sasuke was a bastard, which we all love, no one can deny that, but I never thought I’d actually see his toxic behaviour being addressed and worked on. Here I was just thinking it was an indulgent plot device and a ‘hello’ at canon Sasuke, but I was amazingly wrong because it was so much more. You did an amazing job. No idea if I’m even making sense at this point since it’s 12.30am here and I don’t know how I even found this fic to begin with. On an important side note, I’m glad Sakura had a realistic redemption arc. I’m glad Naruto and Sasuke got back together in a realistic way too. Like, the amount of hours and effort you put into writing this really shines through. There was one line that I totally LOVED (amongst so many others omg) and that was Naruto saying that he and Sasuke kind of make each other insane and legit. They really do. Their bond is so intense canon-wise, and this story really emulated that.

I have only recently gotten back into the Naruto fandom after soo many years of being in others, but I’ve always held a soft spot for my OTP. After I finished rolling around and screeching about this fic ending (loved the slice of life stuff too btw yessss) I clicked into your profile just to see if you were maybe around still on AO3 or tumblr but no luck. Which is understandable considering it’s been so long. But THEN I clicked into your favourites and holy shit, I did a double take because you’ve got my narusasu fic in your faves. Can I just say… I’m kinda honoured (lol srsly) right now. Your fic has moved me in such a way that I want to print it out like the olden days and put it in a binder because it’s just that flippin good, so to find that you really digged my crappy lil fic too lol is just,,, Crazy. I went through my reviews and you left me a lovely review too, so I hope sincerely that this review to you, 10 years very late, is another thank you. I hope you’re doing well in life, whatever fandom you may be in these days. Thanks again! I’ll stop crazy rambling at you now lol XD;
Fanfickween chapter 9 . 9/11/2022
Damn Neji be gettin him good everytime
Fanfickween chapter 7 . 9/11/2022
Period Neji!
magicaldreamforever91 chapter 1 . 8/13/2022
I've already posted one review, and i still stand by it. But by this one too. The thing is, it felt like he was cheating on Naruto, not on Sakura. And I really hate these kind of stories. They claim to love someone, and they still sleep with other people. When you actually, truly love someone, you can't sleep with others. Not because your body won't let you, but because your heart wouldn't. Maybe it's just the way I feel and I'm completely wrong. But i just can't believe you actually love someone when you're able to so easily sleep with someone else, kiss them, touch them and all that. I mean, I could sorta forgive Sasuke, because he didn't seem to admit his feelings for Naruto not even to himself, but Naruto? He claimed to have loved Sasuke for years, yet just because Sasuke got married, he had to try or actually slept with someone else, instead of trying to move on first? That doesn't sound like love to me at all, if it's so easy to be with someone else, even if it's just sex. So no matter how nice the story was, how sweet it was at the end, every time I think about it, it still hurts and leaves a bitter taste in my mouth. They were both sleeping with other people far too easily when claiming to love each other, Naruto even made Neji fall in love with him and hurt him, just 'cause he slept with him and started dating him way too soon. They just hurt each other... Maybe I'm too sensitive. I don't know. But i can't wrap my brain around loving someone and yet being so easy to kiss, touch and sleep with someone else, be it just sex or not. It was a nice story, but too many scenes still hurt a lot, even with the happy ending. Even now, thinking about it, it still hurts. It was really great, but...it hurts...
magicaldreamforever91 chapter 24 . 8/12/2022
Hello. I just finished reading this. And while I totally hated a few things in the beginning, and they hurt my heart a bit, I absolutely adored it. I love Naruto, and all his friends, and I'm slightly obsessed with MM love stories, so I absolutely adored this. I would've loved for Neji to find love too, but I still adored it. While at first I thought it would leave a bitter taste in my mouth and hurt my heart more, I am glad it didn't. It became sweet, and it made cry several times during the story, and shed a few tears of joy at the end. It's my first time here, and this is the first story I'm reading, so I don't yet know what's out here. But I really hope I'll be finding more stories like this. It was sad, but yet happy and so very sweet. I loved it so much.
666snoopy chapter 24 . 12/20/2021
Great job!
human wanna-be chapter 8 . 7/7/2021
ngl the conversation w ino had me crying lolhfjwjfhe NaRuTo TeAcHiNg YoU hOw tO bE a WiFe ¿ dhjwfjejfje omg I really pity sakura
human wanna-be chapter 9 . 7/7/2021
bdjejfjjeje how dumb can people be ? like it's obvious how naruto and sasuke gravitate toward each other
naruko75 chapter 1 . 6/12/2021
okay that was unexpected. Like really shocking Did Sasuke just cheat on his wedding day with NARUTO?!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/17/2021
this feels more like a novel than a fic. i read all night to finish this last year... not wasted at all. my favorite fanfiction ever written. this just has my favorite elements of everything. i visit every couple months to reread. no fic has ever had me as immersed as this one.,
Guest chapter 7 . 4/24/2021
okayy neji stfu byakugan i shit compared to the sharingan period
pages.of.altaire chapter 24 . 2/23/2021
I literally searched for this story for weeks because I read it once and I wanted to read it again. It's so good. It's one of my favorite NaruSasu stores ever. Love it. You're very talented.
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