Reviews for Torrid
Guest chapter 6 . 11/23/2020
Like Nehi rivaling for Narus heart
Guest chapter 5 . 11/23/2020
Omg so cute how he took care of Sasuke
Guest chapter 4 . 11/23/2020
No way! That witch is the true evul one omg
Guest chapter 3 . 11/23/2020
Ewwww Sakura! Cant believe Sasuke went through it
Guest chapter 2 . 11/23/2020
How tragic omg omg omg poor Naruto!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/23/2020
That was a big plot twist for a first chapter and I love it lol
Guest chapter 17 . 11/3/2020
So first of all. The POV changes are insightful and interesting. They try to add something new every time and I appreciate the attempt.
Now I have invested quite a bit of time into this story and I must say that I feel really disappointed with the development of the conflict.
You established the problem in chapter one and you keep exploring it through all of these past chapters while rarely adding any new layer to it. I can't and won't emphasize with Sasuke and while I did understand Naruto in the beginning his behaviour now just seems unreasonable.
The supporting characters are all getting screwed, too, because they have nothing new to add to the situation and keep reiterating solutions to, and despairing over, the same problem.
Nobody is winning in this situation. As the reader I am done with the two main characters because their behaviour is by far the worst and they don't have any excuse to keep doing what they are doing. But I also hate the supporting cast because they keep pushing these by now unlikeable characters together and deny any real progress.
I don't care who gets together with who anymore and that's really sad because the beginning of this story was promising. I think at the core your idea for this story was good but the execution was done really poorly.
CrownRoyalty chapter 9 . 10/23/2020
The way I just screamed at the end. yes Sakura he stole your manz hun ny.
inaaa999 chapter 24 . 7/25/2020
C'est incroyable.

J'ai adoré cette histoire. J'aime l'histoire de Naruto et Sasuke comment elle a commencé. l'évolution des sentiments de Sasuke tout le long de l'histoire.. Un vrai con qui ne se rend pas compte de ce qu'il ressent avant qu'il ne soit trop tard.
J'ai vraiment détésté la scène chaude de la lune de miel j'ai eu la nausée rien qu'en lisant. Hahaha. C'était dégueulasse , comment Sasuke a pu faire ça en étant sobre. a sa place je me serait assuré d'être bien bourrer avant.
D'habitude je déteste voir Naruto ou Sasuke avec d'autres personnes ça me fait chier mais pour une fois ça passe un peu avec neji. parceque Sasuke été vraiment con surtout lorsque Naruto lui a dit qu'il l'aimait pour'la première fois. XD

Cette chienne de Sakura me fait vraiment pitié. je la déteste elle n'a même pas honte de ce qu'elle a fait. En plus elle ose dire que c'est parcequ'elle l'aime. Elle ne se rend même pas compte de son égoisme.. Dans ses explications j'ai eu l'impression qu'elle croit qu'elle sauve sasuke de la solitude que sasuke avait besoin d'elle mais qu'il ne l'a pas encore compris. Faut vraiment qu'elle aille se faire soigner celle la. J'ai toujours détesté cette fille même dans l'anim. Elle force l'amour .

merci d'avoir partagė l'histoire .
digidestined chapter 22 . 7/22/2020
This ties with Therapy by NavyBlueWings as the CUTEST pic I’ve ever read about these two. I spent the past two days reading this with barely any breaks. Fantastic job again. Yes I’m stanning a bit by all my reviews but damnit this fic is worth it!
digidestined chapter 15 . 7/22/2020
Damn Sasuke! Comparing Neji to taking a piss? That’s super petty sir. Way to be a Leo
digidestined chapter 10 . 7/21/2020
This was so hot and so painful all at once! wow! many kudos
digidestined chapter 10 . 7/21/2020
This is written so well! How am I just finding it? Great job
Xx chapter 17 . 5/1/2020
This made me cry 5 years ago and it still makes me cry now... you’re the wind gets me every time. Incredible.
Guest chapter 13 . 1/26/2020
Uh I kinda ship neji and Naruto more than I thought I would do now I'm praying
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