|Reviews for Forgotten about|
| pineapplegrl77 chapter 2 . 7/13/2011
not bad- but you cant be anorexic and bulimic at the same time- they're completely different, and amelia was only bulimic, but other people have already pointed that out... its still good though!
| bubbles chapter 3 . 10/5/2010
yes very good. I would have loved if this was in the book very captivating :)
| Kincora Girl chapter 2 . 7/15/2010
I love how you build up the suspense! I wonder what happens next? I'm off to find out!
| Kincora Girl chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
Great start! I've always wondered about that part of the story!
| Sarah chapter 3 . 6/24/2010
Please continue - getting good!
| xXxFallin chapter 3 . 5/25/2010
Yu havent updated this in 4 months? It's amazing.. Kinda made me cry though :P.. Anyways please update... This story has serious potental to be amazing.
| Selina Auger chapter 3 . 5/15/2010
Its really good, this is a really good book and I hope you do some more jodie picoult books :)
| demon lilith chapter 3 . 2/25/2010
This is so good. I think all the characters are completely in character, except Willow, but she's hard to even understand. I really like how Amelia doesn't go down without a fight. To be honest, I almost cried, reading this. Great job.
| Tough1As6Glass chapter 3 . 2/20/2010
((sorry didn't feel like logging in!)) Don't listen to the hate reviews. I like the story, and your human so of coarse their might be a grammer problem! Continue...Please :D
| Book.Lover.A.F chapter 3 . 1/29/2010
Well, I just happened to stumble into Handle with Care's section today, and found this story, and I must say that I'm enjoying the plot. Hope you keep updating :)
| Bright Silver Lady of Midnight chapter 3 . 1/26/2010
It's sort of OOC, and you have grammar problems.
I'm guessing that you thought Bulimia and Anorexia are close to, if not the same, thing. They aren't. Bulimia isn't as much like Anorexia as you think. Bulimia is a self-hate thing where a person believes they're fat, and eats for the sole purpose of throwing up. Anorexics believe they need to be thinner, and they achieve this by not eating. It's a fine difference to most, because they both involve eating problems, but Bulimia is liked to cutting. Anorexia isn't. Amelia has Bulimia, not Anorexia.
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| Maryland Monroe chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
the characters are ooc. this sucks. ur a bad writer. delet this and go to hell.
| Zoe Nightshade chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
Since you are changing the book because in the book, Amelia was bulimic and Willow died, you should say that. Although I get that you are changing the book completely, I think you should stick to the book's scenario.
Oh, by the way, in case you made a mistake, Amelia was not anorexic, she was bulimic. That means you eat, but then throw it all up later.
Also, the characters in this are OOC, meaning out of character if you do not already know that. Amelia is OOC because of her actions. Also, Sean and Charlotte are out of character. If they are upset with Amelia, you should refer back to the book to see how they are upset with her. They didn't act exactly like you portrayed them.
The big think I am wondering is why are they home eating dinner? If Willow had a serious break, they would be with Willow in the hospital. They would never leave poor Willow alone in the hospital.
| Wein des Lebens chapter 3 . 1/18/2010
Amazing story. Please continue.
| PaigeMariexoxo chapter 3 . 1/17/2010
I liked it a lot! I feel that Amelia's actions are pretty justified, and I like that she's not going down without a fight.