Reviews for Try Again
game-on-panda chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
Outstanding. Beautifully written, with a chilling ending. This is one of the better 2008 Prince of Persia stories I've read. Excellent work.
sink or float chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
This story rocks!
Still Bullet chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
Oh my...I mean,

That. Was. Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful! Really, that was just amazing! I haven't really read many high-quality Prince of Persia stories, but yours was absolutely amazing! I really enjoyed your writing style-it's so detailed and yet so mysterious. I really liked the tone of uncertainty in this, the sense of how things were doomed, yet the Prince held on. It was beautiful! Very nice!

I also really liked reading your artist comments too. It's good to know there are others out there who write more than just a sentence or two :D

Once again, amazing work! That was excellent!
AcrylicSkies chapter 1 . 1/6/2010
Oh, nice. I really enjoyed this twist. Excellent idea. Good job. :3