Reviews for The Fall of a Crown Prince
Dustubuni chapter 6 . 7/14
You know... I needed this. Really, I did. Every other Darkland centered story spends half of it's time making up excuses to either worship Bowser and Jr. or bash the shite out of Mario-usually both. There are exceptions ('Super Mario Apocalypse' and 'Born to be King' come to mind) but they're so rare that they seem non-existent.
WarGreymon X chapter 6 . 12/19/2014
That was amazing, I was surprises that he killed his own father. I expected them to bring Jr. Back or something, but I love that story, it was awesome!
Ludwigs gfriend chapter 6 . 10/30/2014
I'm sorry. I didn't like it. I'm only nine and I was reading this at 00:30 on 1st november, during halloween. I cried my eyes out, and I'll never see Ludwig in the same way ever again.
Example chapter 6 . 12/16/2013
RIP Bowser & Jr. :(
Guest chapter 1 . 12/7/2013
Hey listen man, I'm not saying this story is cool I mean don't get me wrong I actually enjoyed it but...in your next story...Kill Ludwig...
Guest chapter 6 . 12/7/2013
:o...0_0...Wow...That was Extremely dark...
princess chapter 6 . 8/1/2013
I would have been a little upset with Ludwig but I STILL would want to be his Queen!3! Romance!
princess chapter 5 . 8/1/2013
HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO ENJOY THIS CHAPTER?! YOU SHOULD HAVE PUT, "I HOPE YOU DIDNT CRY IN THIS CHAPTER." SSSOOO SAD!o_0!
princess peach chapter 4 . 7/31/2013
I am impressed at Ludwig. How could he do such a thing?! If I was an angel I would've said, " Ludwig, the word of God says, THINK BEFORE YOU ACT. You should have thought about this a little longer. Now you will have to suffer in your earned consequences. Good luck. o_0...
Seeed chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
What a tragedy. :(
Guest chapter 6 . 6/28/2013
YOU ARE FREAKING INSANE! Why would Ludwig goddamn stab his father?!
awsome guy chapter 6 . 4/17/2013
SOB SOB SOB SOB SOB LUDVING YOU SYCOPATH JUST FOR THAT IM GOING TO YOUR CASTEL OVER AND OVER AND KILLING YOU FOR BOWSER AND JR AND IM GETTING THE MARIO BROS TO KILL YOU GO TO HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL LLLLL LUDVING
mike.gilbert.90410 chapter 6 . 3/19/2013
Creepy.
Guest chapter 6 . 12/13/2012
I have to say this is a very chilling and well thought out story. You would expect that someone in that situation would hesitate going through such a change knowing the consequences of what would happen. The ending climax was truly shocking. The story was indeed dark and turn, I saw how the emotions fitted with the story's tone. Overall, I'm glad to read this story even if I was wishing for a happier outcome even if it couldn't be stopped. Anyway, keep up the good work.
I Don't Cry chapter 6 . 11/2/2012
...but this story is very sad :(((((((((8
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