Reviews for The Myth of Abaddon
Crystallia chapter 3 . 5/12/2010
It seems Takuya is this 'Prince of Evil' or something like that...What does he look like in this story? Can you please update at some point in the future?
utsukushii04 chapter 3 . 4/7/2010
Oh! YO sabia que Tommy era el nino! Me siento tan inteligente! _ Bueno, espero que siguas con tus historias, te entiendo cuando dices que no tienes tiempo...Hay nos vemos!
utsukushii04 chapter 2 . 4/7/2010
Heehee, era un poco chistoso como el nino dijo que su jefe o lo que sea los iba a destruir como insectos, y el se hace en una tarantula! Bueno, voy a seguir leyendo! We!
utsukushii04 chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
O.o Tarantula! Oh no, me caen tan mal las aranas ugh! Pero yo no soy el tipo que me pongo a llorar y patalear la ver una, solo me muevo y dejo que otras personas se encarguen de ella! _ Pero esta muy buena la historia, no puedo esperar hasta que salga Takuya!
Crystallia chapter 3 . 4/2/2010
Woah! So Abaddon is Takuya, is he? Please continue. I wonder what Zoe will think about 'Taki' being a demon?
dingcs chapter 3 . 2/5/2010
That was some chapter, it was great! For a little kid, Tommy sure is an evil one to finish off JP like that. Ouch. Oh gosh, and Zoe's mom is dead too! Everyone's gonna die, how terrible T.T

Anyways please update soon! :D
blackandblood chapter 3 . 2/4/2010
COKIE! Anyway, now for the review. That chapter was fucking amazing. I had a feeling that the kid was Tommy, but I wasn't completely sure. And yay! Now we know that Takuya is Abaddon _ This story is getting better and better. And I love the blood and gore as well.

J.P.: Don't you care that I died?

me: No, I actually enjoyed it.

J.P.: Evil wench...

me: Well, I can't wait to see what happens next. Sorry about your homework and depression. Hopefully you get through it soon enough and find inspiration to update. See ya, Julio
lanski12 chapter 2 . 1/17/2010
me-this was lame

Takuya-What your bogous

Me-Not the story my tv this story is awesome but i thought the boy was takuya and you should check out my story "escape from descrution
lanski12 chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
man that creepy spider kid is wierd and i think i wiuld have pissed my pant if that were me peace
dingcs chapter 2 . 1/16/2010
Oh Shanazums! Did Zoe just called her mom a bitch? Wow, she totally has the guts to say that. You know, for 15 years I've wanted to rebel against my mom. LOL! But I'm a wimp blah :\

Great chapter, though I still can't believe that tarantula spoke. It's so...weird. That's like saying walls watch you as you walk down the hall.

Update soon! :D
gcleemon chapter 2 . 1/14/2010
o this story is awesome write more please
hEaRtBrEaKeR19 chapter 2 . 1/11/2010
Might say yes that I'm searching for stupid boy...


Well, AT least he'll come, right? Anyways, like this chap... Did you umm... get this plot from Harry Potter... just asking...

Update Soon... And poor tarantula...
blackandblood chapter 2 . 1/10/2010
Oh, I want my cookie and hot chocolate, so I will review! Hell, even if you didn't offer the treats, I would still review _ Anyway, great chapter, and that tarantula turned back into the boy! Yay! Now they won't be eaten by it. And Zoe's mom is a bitch, haha. Still, I'll trade my mother in for her any day :) Can't wait for the next update. Byez
dingcs chapter 1 . 1/6/2010
Is this a fantasy story? Oh no, it supernatural. I thought it was fantasy cuz this looked like the complete idea of what my older bro was talking to me about. Something about his la la land thingy... oh whatever it wasn't important.

I love how JP, Kouji, and Kouichi instantly hate each other in not even a minute from meeting. Haha, that's rich.

Great intro you have here. I really like it. But I gotta say, you should put Jesus in this story and make him a little OOC. lol, you can make him a rapper! He'd be like, "yo yo, one two, one two. The J-dog is in the house saving the world from sin! wordd up." O_O actually, nevermind...

Can't wait to see Takuya, the king of all idiots, in this!

Takuya: Oh yes! I'm a king!

Me: King of idiots...

Takuya: NO WAY, I'm king of the dragons! *somehow breathes out fire* I AM THE DRAGON KING!

Me: *backs away slwoly* right...

Update soon!

P.S. did that big spider just talk? O_o oh, freaky.. lol
hEaRtBrEaKeR19 chapter 1 . 1/6/2010
Good one... Man, there's so many new Takumi stories right now...

I like it... the giant tarantula was funny, even though it must scare us but I laugh about it...

Anyways, update soon...
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