Reviews for Lacks Creativity
ZaleTheSealedGuardian chapter 1 . 12/29/2013
Jesus Christ. XD
Guest chapter 1 . 8/13/2013
Chie vs yosuke fighting love
atticbrony chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
da fuq did i just read...
HyperInuyasha chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
I am thankful for the TV Tropes listing for this story. It is quite hilarious and everybody seems to be in character. Ah, it's just like real life: somebody bullshitting their way through PE while others complain while lab partners argue over their failure.


Also I really love Kanji/Naoto so thanks for that too.
lazyguy90 chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
Haha, this is hilarious.

Especially enjoy how Chie and Yosuke get along like a house on fire.

Well played.
NightFlowerLuv chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
Oh my god, the last bit made it so much better. XD

Nice job. CX
P.T. Piranha chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
This was funny. I'm not sure how exactly Rise's story bits contributed, but overall still a funny story.
Mage of Hope chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
Love Chie and Yosuke's arguement!
Arrancarzors chapter 1 . 3/13/2012
LAWL. Naoto has just realized one of the main tenets of girldom: complain about something long enough and it will go away. :3

Cute story...never before have I been so eager to see a nosebleed.
Sepsis chapter 1 . 11/10/2011
That was perfect. ;)
ChidoriTachibana chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
D'aw. Kanji got a nosebleed at the last moment, imagining Naoto in a bathing suit. If you remember that scene in the Persona 4 game where Teddie was crying out the results of the physical measurements, Rise was just shocked when she saw Naoto's breast size. Kanji must've gotten a peek at that earlier. XP Keep writing on!

Kannachan27 chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
Oh my god. I died laughing. XDD
Lianait chapter 1 . 5/20/2011
While Reading this I actually laughed so hard, that I was afraid my roommate would come in and ask my what the hell was going on in here xDDD

I'm not sure, if it was your intention, when you wrote it, but I so had to think of Phoenix Wright at the "Objection!"-part and could help myself anymore xD

I also liked the pairings you proposed, since I also like all of them. RisexSouji, ChiexYosuke and best of all: NaotoxKanji It was maybe, but just a teeny-tiny maybe, a little OOC on Naoto's part (she is very outgoing here), but as it was, even funnier :D

I loved the fight between Yousuke and Chie, 'cause it was really IC, and Kanjis noosebleed was awesomme :D
TeddieWuv-deactivated chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
I love the comedy! You should seriously write more. My favorite is with Rise.

' "Rise."


"How is hiding in the closet going to avert impending disaster?"

"Oh, senpai, you think too much."


"Shh!" '

Thank you for writing this!
Holly Unending chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
Dude, the whole thing was hilarious, but the ending was just...hysterical. I can SO see them saying that.

Other best line (besides "I knocked up your mother!" "Chie, that doesn't even work!"): -"'sides, he's an ass."

Damn straight.
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