Reviews for Lacks Creativity
ChidoriTachibana chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
D'aw. Kanji got a nosebleed at the last moment, imagining Naoto in a bathing suit. If you remember that scene in the Persona 4 game where Teddie was crying out the results of the physical measurements, Rise was just shocked when she saw Naoto's breast size. Kanji must've gotten a peek at that earlier. XP Keep writing on!

Wheelie
Kannachan27 chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
Oh my god. I died laughing. XDD
Lianait chapter 1 . 5/20/2011
While Reading this I actually laughed so hard, that I was afraid my roommate would come in and ask my what the hell was going on in here xDDD

I'm not sure, if it was your intention, when you wrote it, but I so had to think of Phoenix Wright at the "Objection!"-part and could help myself anymore xD

I also liked the pairings you proposed, since I also like all of them. RisexSouji, ChiexYosuke and best of all: NaotoxKanji It was maybe, but just a teeny-tiny maybe, a little OOC on Naoto's part (she is very outgoing here), but as it was, even funnier :D

I loved the fight between Yousuke and Chie, 'cause it was really IC, and Kanjis noosebleed was awesomme :D
TeddieWuv-deactivated chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
I love the comedy! You should seriously write more. My favorite is with Rise.

' "Rise."

"Hmm?"

"How is hiding in the closet going to avert impending disaster?"

"Oh, senpai, you think too much."

"But-"

"Shh!" '

Thank you for writing this!
Holly Unending chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
Dude, the whole thing was hilarious, but the ending was just...hysterical. I can SO see them saying that.

Other best line (besides "I knocked up your mother!" "Chie, that doesn't even work!"): -"'sides, he's an ass."

Damn straight.
Random Reader chapter 1 . 7/6/2010
My notion about mothers and knocking up is a little bit... Confuse.
Freack chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
Strangely hilarious. "I KNOCKED UP YOUR MOTHER!" That was a grat zinger at the end.
Rober2 chapter 1 . 4/16/2010
Funny as hell. :) Like it :) Luv it :D
Patcheresu chapter 1 . 3/18/2010
Rise's gunna rapez Souji. DUDE.
Vanui chapter 1 . 3/8/2010
Usually, I don't read crack fics. However, I can make an exception to this awesomeness right here.
accented chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
I've never laughed this hard over fic in a while. You never fail to amaze me, Ren, seriously, stop that. : It's making me palpitate and do embarrassing things of the like.

You did their character traits/dialogue perfectly, my favorites were Souji and Kanji. The Chie/Yousuke fight at the end was especially hilarious, too.

And I loved the subtle hints of Naoto/Kanji, and not just a full-on lovefest. Subtleties are definitely more them, you know?

So brilliant, Ren, so brilliant.
MCK Agent of Moriya chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
I LOLed at Chie and Yosuke's arguement. Good job on this.
kidscanfly chapter 1 . 1/6/2010
“I KNOCKED UP YOUR MOTHER.”

“CHIE, THAT DOESN’T EVEN WORK.”

This is the best conversation ever.
DemonRaily chapter 1 . 1/6/2010
That was indeed hilarious XD
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