Reviews for Things never go right
kail cristensen chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
Is there going to be another chapter, or can i take it and work on it?
seriously, I have several ideas about this spinning through my head.
BYoshi1993 chapter 1 . 4/28/2010
The concept is good but I don't get how this could possible be related to Alvin and the Chipmunks. However, it is only the first chapter, if only a near retelling of the first chapter of the book. Also, the the actions in the story (Dumbledore covering *your* mouth also seems unprofessional and amateurish. If there is any conversation between the characters and the author it should be at the beginning of the chapter so as to not detract from the overall impact of the story to the readers. I do look forward to seeing how this story will end up being a HP/Alvin and the Chipmunks crossover. Please update again soon.

-Michael :D
humaneamy chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
can't wait for a update
panther73110 chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
This is a really interesting story, I hope harry gets away from his aunt.