Reviews for A Different Story
ClearwaterRosalina12 chapter 11 . 7/20/2017
Hey,I want to point out a few things...
In the previous chapters you said lily sat in a muggle car and the muggle driver was surprised to see an owl but in the last chapters you mentioned she borrowed james's owl cx she didnt have hers PLUS you said in the first few chaps that james had told his mother the truth about Luke but now in the last few chaps you mentioned that Michelle didnt know the truth..
MyRainingDropsOfTeal chapter 11 . 5/30/2013
Woot Woot! I loved reading this plot line, it made me happy. Thanks! :D
xXMiss.BrightSideXx chapter 11 . 8/11/2009
I love this story! its so good!
summersgirl2526 chapter 11 . 4/7/2007
aww that was really sad but an awesome story!
lymony chapter 11 . 9/16/2006
heya! great story! you HAVE to do a sequel. just one an earlier chapter you said that Lily has an owl called snowblossom and in chapter ten you say that she doesnt have one! just to let you know! kk thanks bye! x
FallenMystery chapter 11 . 3/28/2005
*sniff**tear**laughs evilly again* I think we're on the same brainwave, because i also killed off James's parents...STALKER! sry about her, my evil other half can never keep from commenting on these...
FallenMystery chapter 9 . 3/28/2005
*giggles**makes contorted face**snorts**face turns impossibly red**finally breaks down into uncontrolled hysterical laughter* Omg, positively loving the whole mind-speak thing...
FallenMystery chapter 8 . 3/28/2005
Ok, I was gonna read it all, then review, but I have to get this out because I'm scaring my entire family by sitting here giggling like mad! Omg, youre a GENIUS! I worship your cunning and witty-ness! (don't even know if that's a word) Anyways, this story is entertaining me beyond all reason! *laughs evilly* I turned Lily into an animagus too. Still haven't posted my fanfic though, and considering i have seven chapters of it written, that's pretty sad...
fallen angel chapter 11 . 1/16/2005
I really liked it! um.. yeah, i know that this isn't exteremly helpful, given the story's already done, but a couple more details, especially on Lily/Luke's transition to being a girl-hey its so not easy. plus, what did she do when the other guys were changing? would they have noticed something weird? did people think she was gay? i don't know, but any ways, over all, i really liked it,(especially lily's animagus) and im going to read some more of your stuff soon (also a tamora pierce fan)
Flame Of Desire chapter 11 . 12/23/2004
cute fic!
The Best witch of all chapter 9 . 10/16/2004
awesome brilliant hope you write more!
Ice Threat Power chapter 11 . 9/29/2004
AWESOME STORY.. its great how original the story is and the characters.. keep going its great!
Laelai chapter 11 . 9/5/2004
Whoa! powerful...I loved it. good job.
Southpark 33 chapter 11 . 7/19/2004
I think ur fic was pretty cool. I spent a week reading it. You put in alot of detail and I hope you can teach me how to make a fic like that. I hope you continue your work. I hope you write another fic, if you do, I will for sure read it. And I think there is nothing wrong with your fic.

Goodluck on your next
Emily Hoyt chapter 11 . 8/27/2003
That is absolutely terrific. I cried. Dang, you're a good writer. I have only cried that much since Sirius actually did die. James only tried. I hate to think if he had and you'd written it. Oh man! Anyway, keep up the great work and continue making wonderful stories.
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