|Reviews for Continuity Error|
| jen-hi chapter 6 . 6/10/2010
You are back on track, yeah! Absolutely loved this, especially the pub scenes and Ianto's worries and heroics for Jack... But I'm curious for what their disagreement in the morning was about exactly. Did I miss anything?
| Francine S chapter 6 . 6/10/2010
glad that you have had a chance to update, omg to jack and ally being kidnap, omg to them killing jack as a warning, so harsh, glad that ianto got in and saved him, they are just too cute, so glad everything worked out, hope that you can update again soon
| hotflower901 chapter 6 . 6/10/2010
I liked the line about offering himself as a target...I liked the cat people.
| Orion Lyonesse chapter 6 . 6/9/2010
I enjoyed this chapter: Jack and Ianto's fight, the group dynamics in the team, the turf war, the aliens, Ianto's heroics. Nicely done!
| cjh4ever chapter 6 . 6/9/2010
Yay, you're back! Good continuation and action. Thank goodness Ally's okay. Pub scene was great.
| bbmcowgirl chapter 6 . 6/9/2010
Wow. You've made up for the very (very) long delay between chapters with a fantastic update. Love this. Of course it just makes me crave more, so...
| milady dragon chapter 6 . 6/9/2010
I can hear it now... "Two cats and a blowfish walk into a bar..."
| LiquidLash chapter 6 . 6/9/2010
You already know how much bits of this made me laugh. Brilliant descriptions of motion etc etc etc... YOU ARE GENIUS, WOMAN.
(Missing you lots! D)
| Somewhere's Sword chapter 6 . 6/9/2010
For some reason the picture of Jack having a drink with two cats and a blowfish amuses me muchly
| hotflower901 chapter 5 . 3/5/2010
They need more team members. A sassy girl for A
| Destined Darkness chapter 5 . 3/4/2010
Lol, love this. They'll get over the 'first injury' thing when they see how much they end up injured
| Somewhere's Sword chapter 5 . 3/3/2010
You amuse me greatly
Ahh, performing in a week and totally not ready Basically, we're screwed. Eep!
| cjh4ever chapter 5 . 3/3/2010
Nice to see the team coming together. And the shopping trolley was inspired thinking.
| Miggs chapter 5 . 3/3/2010
Yay update! Still very much loving this Ianto Jones. May never see the suits again but then again can't complain about the boots, the tight jeans, and the attitude.
Sure hope Jack can keep these two young'uns alive.
| Francine S chapter 5 . 3/3/2010
aww, so glad you got around to updating again, really missed this story, omg to someone being able to corrupt the computers, love jack bending over and the teams responses, poor ally getting attacked like that, so glad she was ok, kinda harsh for gwen to mention that they were younger than ianto when he died, omg to the room being 456, love dans thoughts that ianto had caught something from jack, so hope that you can update again soon