|Reviews for Drabble XIII|
| surxi25 chapter 21 . 3/7/2010
lol poor demy.. xD
Please update soon! nice work so far :)
| surxi25 chapter 20 . 3/1/2010
I'm loving this series, they are so hilarious! And original, too :)
As for the suggestions... you could include some Winnie the Pooh? And it could end up with Axel burning down the 100 Acre Wood (I absolutely hate that world!) lol Or maybe sth during the Radiant Garden/apprentices time? Or just make the Organization guys go to other Disney worlds (getting stuck in Monstro or in a rock in Neverland and not being able to fly).
Anyway, you're doing a great job. I hope you update soon :)
| Clarilune chapter 20 . 2/28/2010
I haven't reviewed this fic in FOREVER, even though you have updated at least twice since I reviewed it! You have every right to slap me in the face for not reviewing soon enough. So sorry :O
ANYWAY, this chapter was just hilarious, as all of them are xD I didn't get the pun at the end until I realized what Luxord's element was. I guess I'm just excruciatingly slow at these kinds of things. It would be an interesting chapter to read to see certain members' having to do different jobs. Like Axel being a teacher ('cause you know he'd be a badass one), or something like...But, nah. That would probably be suited off better in an entirely different story. Has Xion been seen yet? If not, then it would be interesting to see her in a chapter...And perhaps seeing the encounters with Sora would be interesting as well. Ah, sorry. I'm quite bad with suggestions. But I hope more ideas will flourish soon :3 Excellent job, and I'm definitely looking forward to more, as I always am :D
| Pegasus Knight Salvo chapter 3 . 2/20/2010
I just lost the game!
muahahahaha! great writing XD
please continue this story XD
| KHGiggle chapter 18 . 1/23/2010
These stories are funny. I hope you keep writing them.
Also, I don't get the joke with Lex. Shame on me. Can you explain it so it isn't bothering me for the next couple of weeks?
| Clarilune chapter 18 . 1/23/2010
ONLY 9 REVIEWS? THIS IS GENIUS! Shame that there aren't more reviews -.- Anyway, I love this story (erm...stories...) because they're just so cleverly humorous. I shan't tsk for the lateness because it's perfectly understandable :) You're in college; you've got enough pressure as is! Best of luck!
| feralfairy chapter 18 . 1/23/2010
Hahahahaha! Oh, Fireblast, you crack me up. This one was just too amusing. I can totally picture Lex doing that to weasel-Vexen. Haha, then Zexion just stands around doing whatever. Lol. Buut... How does Vexen get healed then? Natural time? I guess so. Wel... I don't have much to say. Oh, good luck with college! And.. That's all.
| feralfairy chapter 17 . 1/13/2010
Aw, man, I wanted to see more Reno. Oh well. Anyway. You are awful. Not in your writing way, but the fact that you update too fast for me too review! Argh! Just kidding. But... I find myself missing chapters more an more! Oh noesesesesess! Hmm... 750. Total. Quite a feat. But how do they count? Each for themselves, I suppose. Okay then. Until next time!
| Different Realm chapter 14 . 1/13/2010
A good collection of drabbles and a suprising amount of chapters in a week. It's nice to see one focused more on comedy than romance. Overall, a good fanfiction. One question though; In the first chapter, you said "Review your ideas" instead of thoughts. Is this just an error or an ask for people to send in their ideas for chapters?
| feralfairy chapter 14 . 1/12/2010
Hahahahahahahahahahaha! I love it! I'm guessing it was Xion who was asking, because of Roxas saying it was where the three of them hung out. I don't know, though. Wouldn't Hollow Bastion be a place for BAD memories for Axel, Saix, and Even? Cause, well, that's where they lost their hearts. Well... It's also where all of there memories are. Soo... I've just gone and answered my own question again. Crap. Anyway, really funny. And as for chapter 13, I swear you go to my school or are physcic or something. Just a few days ago we were discussing natural selection and someone asked if it was a bit like pranksters and payback. Weird...
| feralfairy chapter 11 . 1/11/2010
Ouch! Marluxia's burned! Hahahaha... I love it. Of course, the other comparisons are hilarious, too. But... Demyx does enjoy work. Working on his Sitar, though. Hah. Hmm... But your theory might prove incorrect. After all, Lea only likes fire, and doesn't control- Wait! You said that the powers may come when it's too lae, so... Never mind then. Anyway, Bravo! Keep it up!
| SuberXxXDuperXxXFunMachine chapter 10 . 1/11/2010
oh dear lord, I couldn't stop laughing at chapter nine-honestly I stopped breathing.
It's a funny collection on drabbles, I like it!
| feralfairy chapter 10 . 1/10/2010
Ouch- flower-power's got thorns. But not many. Yeah, I heard about as much on the subject of his scars as you. Though I'm not sure if Ven/Terra were actuall th ones to give him those, seeing as It mightve been slightly against Disney's "play nice" rules. Doesn't matter. What does matter is that you are an awesome Drabbleish writer. Good job!
| AkikuTamikai chapter 9 . 1/9/2010
The ones where they were sick was hilarious. XD
| feralfairy chapter 8 . 1/9/2010
Oh wow! These are great! I was laughing so hard at the sick ones...I guess Larxene, being electricical (sp?) and all wouldn't work...but it would be great blackmail! Hahaha! Anyway, good job! keep it up!