|Reviews for A Sale on Ramen|
| Kikuriki chapter 4 . 9/17
Aniki is brother, but mostly used for an older brother. Otouto is what Iruka would call Naruto, not Aniki. Aniki is what Naruto would call Iruka.
| Guest chapter 4 . 9/10
I don't care if this story is done, I don't care if you never even read this. Fuck you for making Naruto a little brat who hates Minato. For someone who wants to be hokage, he hates his father for doing his JOB? How does that make any kind of sense!? Way to butcher a character.
| Mokkel chapter 14 . 7/21
i don't know why you stopped writing but this story is too good to be left incomplete
| no chapter 4 . 5/31
| Zaliya Lily chapter 14 . 5/15
can't wait til the next chapter
| Axcel chapter 5 . 5/8
Clan marriage does not involve name changes following the husbandks name. It has to do with the involved fanimies' prestige to determine who marries into what clan. Or, if you have no clan such as in the Yondaime's case, you are by default considered a member of the clan (technically marrying Kushina who was literally royalty since Uzu no Kuni was ruled by her clan made him Uzumaki Minato).
| trviasgames911 chapter 4 . 5/7
nice story and love this chapter but hate the fact that you changed to teams around but I will get through it though.
| kurifu gari chapter 5 . 4/15
As redundant as this is you should also include sadness and sorrow (the song in the anime during the third's funeral) it would add a melodramatic theme to your music section
| kurifu gari chapter 3 . 4/15
As ineffectual as it may be I would vote for a ocrina. As it allows the most deft training in the fingers
| Sjstaudt chapter 6 . 1/21
Why is Naruto using noodle dough when ichiraku's can't afford the extra ingredients? Is he paying for the supplies himself?
| Crusade chapter 9 . 1/3
WHAT THE FUUUCK...
Naruto and lee same class? Lee passed naruto didnt?
Omg... This story seemed good too...
Cant read something like this though...
I read this to find a stronger naruto x ayame...
Not an even worse naruto that os actually older than the rest of his class when he is actually younger than most in canon...
Just makes him even more of a weak idiot...
| Toto chapter 8 . 1/3
Ino is water and shino is fire.
| Olle chapter 5 . 1/3
Naruto is not actually using dough as a weapon is he now?...
| Jeppe chapter 4 . 1/3
So naruto doesnt even get what is rightfully his?
Comon.. After what the fourth did to him...
Getting his scrolls is the least he could get..
And kinda fair when the rest of the genin his year has had help from family when he has nothing...
Even sasuke got help from his family before they died.. Allt too...
| Crusade chapter 3 . 1/3
Waot wait wait...
You said naruto could fight anyone in taijutsu...
Which would probably put him at sasukes level...
But kiba i second only to sasuke?
That doesnt seem to make sense...