|Reviews for Ministry of Lost Souls|
| Guest chapter 8 . 4/23/2014
This was bitter sweet...
Edward is a...what's the most pleasant word that isn't vile or disgusting to describe his complete idiocy...
Edward is a...fucking asshole - I apologise, credits go to the the 300 million Americans on the web who use the vile tongue like fate and destiny are about to end...
| RainBlueWater chapter 1 . 11/30/2011
10 out of 10
| Silo666 chapter 8 . 11/28/2010
i say u have jasper be the inprint of leah adn that billy dosnt see it as a brack of the treety cosue she was saving bellas life
| Shrodeddrknss13 chapter 8 . 11/27/2010
hmm. It is interesting how you seem to give edward a ghost-like form, in that he can physically appear to bella (chapter 1), but also mention that he is a "prisoner" in her mind. Does this mean he may be making several appearances later? Also, you have not yet mentioned Jake, except that he was not the one to pull bella from the water.
not quite certain where you are headed with this story, but trust that you know what you are doing.
Good luck updating!
| Zoie1234 chapter 8 . 10/5/2010
update soon ;)
| Demon of the Snow chapter 8 . 8/12/2010
If the were wolves kill Alice, I'll fucking scream.
| Jai-Lewis chapter 8 . 8/4/2010
| Jai-Lewis chapter 5 . 8/4/2010
Wow edward is an ass even when he's dead lol
Love ur story
| xAceOfHarts chapter 8 . 8/3/2010
Great chapter. :] Keep it up
| elfspirit7 chapter 8 . 8/3/2010
AWESOME! Please update as soon as you can, can't wait to read the next chapter XD!
| lynettecullen chapter 8 . 8/3/2010
Shit, I hope that she doesn't get into too much trouble.
I LOVED the update.
| Hollow Pages chapter 8 . 8/3/2010
Yay, an update from my fellow Bellice guy. Woot. Nice one, too.
| Eclipz chapter 7 . 7/25/2010
Damn good story!
Looking forward to the next update! ;)
| DarkBella chapter 7 . 7/19/2010
great stuff but I'd recommend a bit of humor. My stuff is angsty as heck and even I like to laugh
| TheRedPoet chapter 5 . 7/18/2010
Well, nobody can blame ya for making Bella a stronger character than in the movies or books. :P
Don't take that as criticism, you write well.