Reviews for What If
tina chapter 4 . 5/19
you shud write about halt x will and the punishment dealt to alda Jerome and bryn
Guest chapter 4 . 2/13
It okay :3
Guest chapter 3 . 2/13
O_o
Guest chapter 2 . 2/13
YUS WILL X HALT FINALLY ITS HARD TO FIND FANFICS LIKE THESE
Guest chapter 1 . 2/13
Poor will :3
Meralyin chapter 4 . 12/24/2015
Please you HAVE to come back to this story! Please please pleeeeeeeaaaaaaaaasssseee! You just need finish what happens to Will and how he recovers mentally and physically! Please! You cant leave off at a point like that! This story is soo saaad and wonderful and I neeeed to know what happens! Please dont abandon this story! I totally understand lack of inspiration.. and I'm sorry if im being too demanding...but i'm just crazy about this story! I would LOVE it sooo much if you came back and wrote at least one more chapter! And you have 52 reviews so i know alot of other people would too! Just consider it...maybe...
Will chapter 4 . 11/4/2015
I feel bad for your version of me D;
Horace chapter 2 . 11/4/2015
IM GOING TO FUVKING KILL THEM
Serenity di Angelo chapter 3 . 1/21/2015
I just thought of a solution... You can put the story up for adoption!...
Serenity di Angelo chapter 4 . 1/9/2015
No no no no no! You have to listen to Halt! "Nothing is ever really impassable! If you just overcome this seemly impassable barrier... Then I'm sure you'll have more ideas sprouting out of nowhere! And I'll be waiting...
Fion-On chapter 2 . 9/5/2014
Um. Ok.
Guest chapter 4 . 8/6/2014
"Interesting" story.
hi chapter 4 . 6/26/2014
I really like your fanfic and i know it would be a lot more work for you but i really would love it if you rewrote it. I found npthing wrong the writing and its a lot better than other writers on fanfiction.
ranger 52 chapter 4 . 5/1/2014
please continue i want to know what happens you are an amzing writer :] carry on ranger and never give up
RequinKei chapter 4 . 12/23/2013
Please please please write more! PLEASE! I'm begging you!
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