Reviews for What If
Shadow chapter 2 . 7/11
What in the world have you even read the whole series? If you did, you would know
Halt would never do THAT, even to comfort Will.
WillTreaty532 chapter 1 . 5/7
This is good
Could you please make more
Guest chapter 2 . 10/8/2016
what the fuck
tina chapter 4 . 5/19/2016
you shud write about halt x will and the punishment dealt to alda Jerome and bryn
Guest chapter 4 . 2/13/2016
It okay :3
Guest chapter 3 . 2/13/2016
O_o
Guest chapter 2 . 2/13/2016
YUS WILL X HALT FINALLY ITS HARD TO FIND FANFICS LIKE THESE
Guest chapter 1 . 2/13/2016
Poor will :3
Meralyin chapter 4 . 12/24/2015
Please you HAVE to come back to this story! Please please pleeeeeeeaaaaaaaaasssseee! You just need finish what happens to Will and how he recovers mentally and physically! Please! You cant leave off at a point like that! This story is soo saaad and wonderful and I neeeed to know what happens! Please dont abandon this story! I totally understand lack of inspiration.. and I'm sorry if im being too demanding...but i'm just crazy about this story! I would LOVE it sooo much if you came back and wrote at least one more chapter! And you have 52 reviews so i know alot of other people would too! Just consider it...maybe...
Will chapter 4 . 11/4/2015
I feel bad for your version of me D;
Horace chapter 2 . 11/4/2015
IM GOING TO FUVKING KILL THEM
Serenity di Angelo chapter 3 . 1/21/2015
I just thought of a solution... You can put the story up for adoption!...
Serenity di Angelo chapter 4 . 1/9/2015
No no no no no! You have to listen to Halt! "Nothing is ever really impassable! If you just overcome this seemly impassable barrier... Then I'm sure you'll have more ideas sprouting out of nowhere! And I'll be waiting...
Fion-On chapter 2 . 9/5/2014
Um. Ok.
Guest chapter 4 . 8/6/2014
"Interesting" story.
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