I'm sorry, but this is a truly terrible story. Draco is irredeemable in this. Rapists and abusers cannot be redeemed, and in the very rare instance they can, it has to be done extremely delicately. But still, 99% of the time they cannot be redeemed. Also, calling Narcissa "Mum"? Awful and so OOC. Draco is beyond cruel in this and for no reason. Nothing is ever explained. Hermione has no personality. Sorry :(

How is a Draco a rapist, abuser, redeemed?

Not cool with all the spousal rape!

I don't remember saving this or not but love this very much

I do not believe in leaving negative reviews for any work, knowing firsthand how hurtful it is for a writer. I can understand the use of themes such as Stockholm Syndrome and marital rape. But, to capture these sensitive themes correctly in a fanfic is a very difficult task. One slip up and the fanfic would end up portraying a highly abusive relationship as a believable and acceptable one, similar to what has happened here. I was disturbed when Draco used unforgivable curses on his wife, and was more disturbed to see Hermione meekly accepting the treatment meted out to her. This is the same girl who played a pivotal role in Voldemort’s downfall and the portrayal in the fic is quite hard to accept. I am hoping that this will be addressed in the work.

overall you have great story. but I think you need beta or something else. the plot and the characters especially really confusing.

the characters are not stable. Draco using crucio? really? he disgusted with Hermione but he always end up with having sex with her for 3 months. you need described it so we could understand. and no interaction between the characters. I thought Hermione is the most lonely person in this fic. and I really really really hate Hermione in this fic. she absolutely not Hermione. even OOC, I think none out there in the real world can be like Hermione. falling in love with 3 months with someone who has cruciod, raped, abused, or even molested her.

Narcissa. i don't know. i think she is not quite important. she loves Hermione but just sitting around nothing to do whenever her husband and son abused Hermione.

DracoDean friendship, sorry this quite strange. so I need to imagine Blaise instead of Dean. and Ginny, same as Narcissa, I think you no need to add ginny or the weasleys clan into the story. i hope you can rewrite this story.

i don't understand. sho he let Hermione go because he wants to get married with his ex?

Ok... I’m very confused... the hell?!(lmao) Is Hermione okay? Did she like forget all the shit she went through?

Yah he wasn't the same guy he was worse than a bully with the constant rapings and the unforgivables he was an angel and don't forget the beatings and the mental abuse what a good guy. Hermione had stockholm syndrome from the trauma what a stand up guy now he doesn't call anybody a mudblood but raping and abusing one that was your wife is the just thing to do. This makes no sense.

Pity that Hermione didn’t kill Draco. This story was utterly rubbish and extremely toxic. It sends a very bad message to the young girls who read this story. It’s appalling that Draco is being praised for untying her when he put her in the bounds in the first place. He abused her and raped her repeatedly and then she started falling in love with him? Ridiculous.

WTH

I am out of words and speechless. Just a reminder for those who think this is romantic: There is NOTHING romantic about this lovestory. Draco raped and abused her on the first part, and then Hermione comes to love him? This is just another example of a toxic relationship

This is the most toxic relationship I've ever read in a Dramione fanfic, like bruh why-

Ooh! This is so romantic Draco is violent in the beginning and kind in the end love it

There are some stories that hold up regardless of age. Others do not, and sadly, this falls into the latter category. The inexcusable abuses at the beginning of the story negate the 'love' that follows. It's rather disgusting to depict Hermione capable of falling in love with a man that used an Unforgivable on her. Perhaps it could have worked during the course of an entire war, but a three-month period? C'mon now, that's just lazy writing.

Also, your depiction of toddlers is as abysmal as your depictions of love.
I do hope you've grown, and if you modelled this after your life, I pray you've escaped your abuses.

Overall this story was sooo good but also confused. Draco both raped and abused her countless times and she loved him for it? I think if certain aspects had been different then I would definitely agree with the plot. Still, a very good story