Reviews for The Third's Fourth Pupil
Legendary Legend Layer chapter 1 . 9/13
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i really like this story its very well thought out and planned,
Sleeping Dragon2333 chapter 12 . 8/29
Oh good god, first an emotional chapter. Supportive Naruto a not as jerk Sasuke and you leave with a cliffhanger! (Starts to cry.) Normally I don't really care and I find panicking over these things troublesome, but please update.
NaruHinaF chapter 12 . 6/26
Can u make chapter 12? I like your story!
Guest chapter 12 . 12/4/2016
I think it has been too long since you updated this.
Guest chapter 12 . 10/26/2016
Hey thanks for the great story so far. U should continue this though this has been one of the best fanfic s I've read so please continue not to mention u left us with a cliff hanger.

Brandon Shippee
SnarrySlave chapter 12 . 5/5/2016
I like it i do hope you will come back and continue this story.
arinasution5 chapter 4 . 5/2/2016
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GraceHeart27 chapter 12 . 3/3/2016
Pleeeeaaase update! It's so good and it's been years since the last one
Lu Phantom chapter 12 . 9/13/2015
WHY U DO THIS TO ME
QuentinTNT chapter 12 . 7/28/2015
What? Why a cliffhanger?
seastar529 chapter 12 . 3/8/2015
Hi, I really love this story. It's been three years but . . . is there still hope to continue? This has been an amazing ride so far.
ViciousFitz chapter 12 . 3/1/2015
MEGA THREE YEAR CLIFFHANGER!
Guest chapter 11 . 1/16/2015
Good so far. Not to sound like a jerk but this story is about the thirds 4th student and just hinatas problems right?! Focus on that not this!
corbinskydragon1 chapter 12 . 11/15/2014
This is awesome you've got to continue this story! It's great. Can't wait to read what happens next.
Jameslw chapter 12 . 10/18/2014
great please continue
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