|Reviews for Sleeper Agent|
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/5
I hardly ever read reviews on stories, and considering the last time this was updated was roughly 4 years ago, I doubt you'll even see this. But I have to write this.
I first read this story when I was in 10th grade. Which was around 2010. I remember how it affected me and how it's all I thought about. I read it every chance I got, and it tore my emotions in two. It was so beautifully written yet dark and morbid. It resulted in one of, if not the, best fanfiction I've ever read. And I've read a good bit. But, I never finished it. I don't remember why, but I only ever made it to Zim and Dib's split-up at the motel room. And that was that. So, 4 days ago, having aged almost 6 years since reading this for the first time, I suddenly remembered it. It definitely left a lasting image in my mind. I found it and immediately began reading. I've just finished it, and even without a completed ending, this is even better than I remembered. Kudos to you, Angel-Chan and AngelNocturne for this amazing writing. This story may have been forgotten or abandoned, but it stands the test of time with me. Thank you for such a wonderful read. I will never forget it.
| YourSimpleWallflower chapter 35 . 3/16
I have to say. . . I spent a whole three days reading this fic, and this has got to be the most beautiful and intense story that I've read in a long time! (And that doesn't just involve fanfics!)
Seriously! You, my friend, and the other author as well are just incredible! I was screaming in my head almost the entire time, whether from excitement with Zim and Dib's conflict or at Keef's antagonizing disturbance. Half the time I would get so sucked into the plot that I would start exclaiming things out loud, and I'd just toss my tablet down thinking: "Oh my god this is way too much just AAGGGHHH! OH MY FLIPPIN GOD I can't read anymore of it this! I KNOW WHAT"S GOING TO HAPPEN AGH NO NO I'm NOT reading this!"
Then after a couple of seconds I'd pick it back up to start reading again, even though I was still way too thrilled to handle it! XD Haha, that's what I love about this story. I also really love how at the beginning it's so cute at first with Zim and Dib acting as themselves, and when Keef jumps in he also doesn't seem that threatening- creepy and annoying- but not threatening. It starts off just like a regular Invader Zim episode, but instead of altering any of the characters, the two of you just added more depth to them. It was amazing the entire time I read this (because I didn't even notice at first!) how all of the characters morphed in such a natural way that I couldn't even realize it until the very end.
My favorite thing of all though has got to be the scar; Dib's scar on his collarbone and the value Zim has for it. For some reason, that factor in the story is just too beautiful to put into words! 3 Along with the eyes. For some reason I find it extremely sweet, especially in the part with the false-Dib, when it explained how Keef (The little PRICK!) didn't have the scar, and so he knew it wasn't, "HIS Dib." That's definitely one of my favorite moments in the entire story.
Apart from that, I just love all of it! This story completely draws you in when you read it, letting you feel so much emotion and thought behind it, it's just breath-taking! So hateful and passionate at the same time; twisted up in the most magnificent ways, and matching so much character as well! I'm practically addicted to it; and even though they still have to stop Keef I feel like this chapter works as a very nice ending. :) Just by having Zim FINALLY give in to his, "Lurv," haha, it's just amazing
You don't know how glad I am that I came across this. I was just browsing D.A. for Invader Zim stuff when I found a picture based on this fanfic, and I decided, "I'll go take a look!" and I'm happy to say that I have no regret, because this right here. . .this story is a masterpiece.
Now excuse me while I go re-read the entire thing. _
| Celest chapter 35 . 3/10
Someone recommended this fic to me. That person is evil. EVIL. I can't believe they would rec this knowing it wasn't completed! First that Gravity Falls episode today, and now this? This is so fucking sad and good and you're leaving it here? This fic hasn't been updated since I graduated high school! I'm a senior in college now! Are you kidding me? I'm so mad. So mad. None of the good fics are ever done. Can't believe it. Can't believe someone would do this to another person. I'm a good person. I don't deserve this.
| BabyGhost123 chapter 35 . 9/3/2014
I love the story...I just love how Zim is so possessive of Dib but then he's in denial he just needs to accept that he lived Dib...update soon and live your writing...
| glowzilla48 chapter 35 . 4/7/2014
I love this story! your such a good writer!
| Invader Ferret from Planet Mad chapter 34 . 1/17/2014
Oh! And I forgot to mention that you guys owe me two nights sleep which Ilost reading this fanfic from paradise, a full can of coke that I crushed when reading about the first proper sex scene in nervousness, a new pair of jeans that got ruined by the coke and to pillows I punched to exploding during the two Keef scenes. Bastard made me want to kill him for having the nerve to touch Dibs Zim!
Oh well, I might consider forgiving you both and forgetting the debt if an update or two is posted... XD
| Invader Ferret from Planet Mad chapter 35 . 1/17/2014
I just found this wondrous piece of writing and I'm begging you, please don't put me through a torturously long wait until I can bask in another chapter! The story is incredible with the characters personalities staying close enough to the original personalities to allow me to clearly imagine them while making them different enough to put a whole new spin on things, the plot is amazing mI'm absolutely loving Keefs part: creepy from beginning into next level creepy!) and OMFG the sex scenes are just... WOW! Both authors of the masterpiece deserve prizes, I'm truly in awe of your creativity! Can't wait to read more, loving it so far but I just need to read about a satisfying end to Keef (Hopefully with a scene where Dib finally tops Zim along the way) and a happy ending! D
| Word-Spitting-Dragon chapter 35 . 1/1/2013
Love love love this story and hope it's not gone the way of so many wonderful fics with an infi-hiatus! Please, if you've got the time to write, I would adore you all the more if you continued this amazing fic! 3 3 3
| Mabtew chapter 35 . 10/16/2012
Woah.. I finished this in three days because I was so hooked. It says this was last updated a year ago.. It's sad but even here as an ending, it's still beautiful. It pulled my emotions and I -felt- it.. Really spectacular job, both of you. I normally prefer Zim/Dib as a more.. rivalry, hate kind of ship, but even with the sentiment in this it was exactly how I pictured. the only thing I could even crit was that Dib seemed to think everything should be solved by sex (which in a perfect world, it would!) But honestly I'm not even bothered. I'm still in some stage of shock from this ending, I applaud you. I'll definitely reread it some time.
| Twinkel13 chapter 35 . 10/7/2012
I've been reading this whole thing in about 3 days or so and
OMG this is SO F-ING INTERESTING3
the sex is hot, the drama is realistic for it's labels, the characters are in character for it's labels, the fluff is adorable and it's all just brilliant, if not a little long for so little to happen but that is good in the way of it being very detailed
please keep updating this fic because I really want to know where it's all going X3
| Avagantomos chapter 35 . 9/19/2012
Oh. My. GLOB! This was amazing! I just finished the last chapter and am IN LOVE. :D
I hope you don't put it on temporary Hiatus because it's soooo awesome!
| Athena Keating-Thomas chapter 4 . 7/27/2012
I'm just wondering. Is the explody thing with Keef from an unreleased IZ episode? From one of your other fics that I haven't gotten to yet? Or is it just a plot point to roll with in this story?
| Athena Keating-Thomas chapter 2 . 7/27/2012
This is amusing as heck, especially the Zim-isms that you come up with.
You're also doing pretty well at the editing so that every paragraph doesn't go back and forth with a time-jump backward for each. The story reads more easily for that...
| Rainmy chapter 35 . 6/28/2012
I never read incomplete stories that appear to be droped but yours is a special case,I liked your other IZ fics so much I just couldn't ignore this one,also I am amazed than a co project feels so natural,I think I already said so in a previous coment months ago but I'll repeat it,I would never guess this is done by two people if I wasn't told so,that said I really oope you decide to continue,until then!
| SilkenRoseDreams chapter 35 . 6/4/2012
All the fun of a PWP but with plot included! Score! But seriously, you two should quit your jobs. You have promising careers in the porn-writing industry. I am almost desensitized to yaoi like I was long ago to het, but this... Hoo-ee. I love it. My body did too, and that's even with the random interruptions at the beginning lol. BTW, I found those teasing interruptions extremely amusing. Oh those poor, sweet, tortured boys!