Reviews for What Hurts The Most
lovingit3 chapter 4 . 1/21/2010
I hope Bella will speak with him! I cant wait to see what happens next! Great Story!
lovingit3 chapter 1 . 1/21/2010
oh that ending to this chapter broke my heart! Cant wait to see what happens next
ECis4Me chapter 4 . 1/21/2010
I'm really glad that Charlie is supportive and thank you for shedding light on why Bella did what she did.

Looking forward to more of the family finding out and really looking forward to some ExB time.. :)
ArdnaidOcirg chapter 4 . 1/21/2010
Awesome update! I really can't wait for more! :D
mountainlion718 chapter 4 . 1/21/2010
Omg, I'm in tears, that was so emotional. Now he knows why and how much sho loves him. I hope he can convince her to come up and hopefully they can talk
coldplaywhore chapter 4 . 1/21/2010
You already know I loved this chapter. Charlie was so cute and understanding. I do love me some decent Charlie, and if you would ever fricking finish reading American Girl / American Boy you would see my decent Charlie LOL

Where the hell did you see that the shadowboxer epi was being posted today? **bounces excitedly in her seat** I don't bounce... but that story is one of my favs of all fricking time.
mummyanimal chapter 4 . 1/21/2010
I knew Charlie wouldnt shoot him, im surprised and soo happy Charlie gave Edward Bella's info so easily I think I love your Charlie :D!

Poor Edward I could feel his emotions, had tears in my eyes throughout bless him.

Love ya chick x
raya31 chapter 4 . 1/21/2010
This was a fantastic chapter.

I loved the emotions between Edward and Charlie and all the things we learnt about EC.

Great work!
gossip-bangkok chapter 4 . 1/21/2010
Hi my friend! :)

I've finished this and aww..

by the end of the chapter, you've left me in tears.

You're doing extremely well bb! :)

4 chapters are you've over 60 reviews! :)

I cannot wait for more!

This is freaken amazing! :)

Thank you.

I can't wait till Edward meets E.C. and Bella again!


P.S. I've r&r every chapter 3
stingraycullen chapter 4 . 1/21/2010
Yay for Charlie! And another lovely chapter :)
1sarina chapter 4 . 1/21/2010


carebear309 chapter 3 . 1/18/2010
LOVE Alice for going off on Edward and calling him out for his behavior for the past 4 years. Still not buying his excuses for that.

Can't wait for that talk with Charlie...this is going to be good :)

Wonder what Edward's parents will have to say about being kept in the dark about their grandson. They have to have suspected something when Bella picked up and left all those years ago.
carebear309 chapter 2 . 1/18/2010
Yeah, it's kind of hard to believe how "heartbroken" Edward was about Bella when he talks about his manwhoring ways all through college and then to hear him talk about the flight attendants was disgusting. I mean, you don't expect him to be a monk and not try to move on at all, but he's not better than he was before Bella came along. If he learned anything from being with her, he should have learned how disrespectful that lifestyle is.

Even if he does get to see Bella again, I can't imagine what she will think of him in their time apart. Yes, she broke up with him (which I think was incredibly dumb on her part...she owes it to him to tell him he's a father and let him get to know his son) but I don't think she'll be willing to jump right back into his arms if he confesses his love to her. It will be kind of hard to believe him when she hears about his past indescretions.
Mrs.Robinsome chapter 3 . 1/15/2010
Good Gawd! Just started this story today and I'm spent. Whew! Def. Hooked.
mscope chapter 3 . 1/15/2010
Wow. This is one of those chapters that has no winners really and you can't even really chalk it up to bad choices.

A very young Bella is not at fault for this one. I am somewhat surprised that her parents did not intervene in some way but I will not find fault with them for not doing so. I have to believe that at the time they did not only what was necessary but what was best to help their daughter through a most trying time in her life. I also have to believe the choice she made was best for her at the time. From what we have seen she has become a wonderful mother with no animosity for Edward.

I would not want to be Alice in this chapter. She holds the key and he thinks he is prepared for the answers. And so much time has passed. I can't help but cry a little knowing how hard this must have been for her. To have been placed in this position is unfair. She has paid an extremely high price, not only in keeping it from Edward but in keeping it from their parents as well. Not only that but she has remained in contact with Bella and is also privy to Edward's exploits from Jasper. She has carried everyone's luggage and I can only hope that when the house of cards fall everyone will understand the enormity of her burden.

Sure Edward wants answers from Alice. He needs answers from someone after what he saw in Florida. I love how you portrayed their emotions throughout the conversation leaving no stone unturned. Edward needs more answers but they are answers that will have to come from Bella herself.

I can only speculate how things will go when Edward comes face to face with Charlie. Or how things will go when Bella comes back to town. I may even be a bit nervous for the next chapter but at the same time feel a sense of hope.

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