Reviews for What Hurts The Most
WiseOldSoul chapter 30 . 2/26/2016
edward is so lucky, or maybe it's bella.
either is so lucky that angela is edward's friend.
what other girl would say and do the things she has done
with edward? if it was tanya, she would have had her claws into
edward a long time ago...saying all the right or wrong? things to
have edward move on and let go of bella completely...or
as completely as he can...
this whole thing is just driving me crazy...
you have got to come to a resolution soon...
you have had your fun..enough is ENOUGH!
WiseOldSoul chapter 21 . 2/26/2016
so i really dont understand what bella has against edward after he told
her about his visit to miami when he first saw her and son.
she is the one being very difficult here and being quite
obtuse...then again, if she wasnt, we wouldnt have a story i guess...
but, this really sucks...almost to the point of being stupid, pointless...
WiseOldSoul chapter 13 . 2/26/2016
as cheezy as this may sound, i love how he begged her forgiveness.
i loved how he explained in detail about what he felt and it sounded
perfect. i cant say i still dont feel sick about it but the way he begged
her was perfect. although she loved him and he was putting everything
out there, wished bella held out a bit...maybe for a day at least.
other fics i see, edward doesnt beg enough for me...but here,
i felt his desperation and his sincerity...yea yea, it's kind of cheezy,
but it is needed in situation like this...at least, i do.
so kudos! :) well done.
Guest chapter 35 . 2/3/2016
Are you going to finish this story? I want so much to know how this ends and read about their happily ever after! It's been a long time since you updated and you said you "would" finish this story. Hope you do
Lania chapter 35 . 1/4/2016
This story was amazing, and I know because it made me cry a few tears, and I didn't eve cry when I watched Leonardo DiCaprio's Titanic!
Mitzi1958 chapter 32 . 12/31/2015
First off, I am so happy to see that this story is finished! I read it a long time ago and it left when Edward met E.C. But really did not catch on he was his father. He saw E.C., Bella and Phil and thought they were a family!

This chapter gutted! Just as much as my FAVORITE chapter of where Edward has his own P.O.V. On the Bella who is a Drug addict and he sees her after a long period of time, still realizes he loves her but he is with someone else, I think he is engaged to the woman but in the end Bella can not take the real truth of what happen to their relationship and not her take of why they broke up and kills herself! That is one of my favorite chapters of all time! I did not compute that you wrote both of these stories! I saw the recommendation you got to the new cheaters contest of Twilight and Fifty Shades stories! I said I know this author and when I looked at your stories was I excited!

Now on too this story! I love it like I said and are there really douche bags like this Jake? I have read some really sorry Jake's but I think yours takes the first prize! I mean treating Bella like he did is one thing but to wish and act talk like he was going to kill a 4 year old boy is low! Lower than dirta! And his excuses he gives her in the next chapter when he has the nerve to come back to the hospital! The man is sick and needs professional help!

Well anyway like I said so glad that this story is complete and you did I great job of telling this! I am going to read the alternate ending,mi am hoping it dose not have E.C. Getting hurt, I hope!

A fan and since it is 8:30p.m. On New Years Eve 2015, I wish you a happy and pleasant New Year to you and your family! May it bring only happiness, love and good health and fortune!
Guest chapter 2 . 12/18/2015
For someone with a 4.0 GPA, this guy is pretty stupid. Doesn't he know basic maths?
reds-red chapter 35 . 12/6/2015
Still waiting on the last chapter and epi...
KNG1986 chapter 3 . 10/17/2015
It is always wrong to keep a child from their parent. As Edward's sister, Alice had an obligation to tell Edward about his son not to mention her parents have been denied their grandchild. As for Edward's lifestyle, he was single through no fault of his own. Even if Bella hurts like hell knowing he slept with all those women, it's nothing compared to the pain of missing out on years of your child's life. He did nothing wrong. Can't say the same about Bella and Alice.
divyvicki chapter 35 . 7/14/2015
Great ending to a great story. Can't wait for the finale
divyvicki chapter 34 . 7/8/2015
I'm so anxious for the new update u promised.
divyvicki chapter 33 . 7/2/2015
So glad they are talking to each other. Hope u finish this soon!
Miss G Lovett chapter 35 . 6/29/2015
Even though it's not really finished - still needing a few chapters, I feel like it's at a good place, even if it ended here. I really liked this story, however really hated the characters actions.. But hey, it was still a brilliant story!
divyvicki chapter 32 . 6/25/2015
What a wonderful way for Bella to find out what a snake Jake really was.
divyvicki chapter 31 . 6/20/2015
Wow, I sure wasn't expecting that to happen! Hope u plan to finish this soon. I think, if I recall correctly when I started this u said it was mostly finished with only an epilogue remaining.
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