|Reviews for Salvaged|
| Nayeli Clearwater chapter 44 . 3/8
| Bell 1 chapter 54 . 1/18
I enjoyed this story until the end... only because it doesn't really seem like the end. I mean, you leave the biggest part of the story unfinished, Xavier.
Anyway... As far as what you have written of the story goes...
I loved what you did with Jasper, Billy, and Sarah in this story. Jacob was definitely overbearing with his protectiveness over Bella. I loved Billy... Bella certainly had him wrapped around her finger. LOL
The hardest part was the split between Paul and Bella. Though, it gave us a little bit of Jasper and Bella time, so I can't complain too much. My heart broke for Paul as much as it did for Bella... then for Jasper when he realized he wouldn't get the girl, but he knew that because of who he was working for. Paul was such a sweetheart in this, falling in love with a girl when he was eleven and she was ten. Then discovering she was meant for him all along was the icing on the cake. :D
I guess it didn't surprise me too much to find out that Renee was turned into a vampire. I was so disappointed in the fact she held absolutely no feelings for Bella anymore. It was sad, but made it easier when she was killed at the end. *winks*
DANG! Poor Quil. It's always sad to see a lovable character die. Also, Charlie didn't even have a chance in this story.
I thought it was also pretty cute that Jacob was head over heels for Leah before he imprinted, or even phased.
Thank you so much for sharing this story with us. :D
I have more to say, but will PM you about it.
| Nayeli Clearwater chapter 31 . 12/2/2013
| Nayeli Clearwater chapter 28 . 12/2/2013
Let me guess, Jasper was the kid who came running out of the woods and brought Bella back, wasn't he?
| lizzynava chapter 54 . 5/27/2013
That was good. Keep going I want to know what else happens.
| Carla Mikaelson chapter 55 . 1/11/2013
I loved your story. I wanted to know if you're making a sequel? I would like you to tell me to read it
| Robin.D chapter 54 . 12/9/2012
oh wow is there going to be a part 2 to this story? i hope so this story was a good one :o) ;o) :D:D
| Robin.D chapter 53 . 12/9/2012
wow Bella was badass lol ;o) good chapter :):):D:D
| Robin.D chapter 52 . 12/9/2012
oh wow that got to get to Bella soon :o( good chapter :):):D:D
| Robin.D chapter 51 . 12/9/2012
oh wow Bellas mom :o/ good chapter :):):D:D
| Robin.D chapter 50 . 12/9/2012
oh wow poor Quil :o( poor Bella :o( good chapter :):):D:D
| Robin.D chapter 49 . 12/9/2012
I would have rocked your world lol good one Bella ;o) good chapter :):):D:D
| Robin.D chapter 48 . 12/9/2012
wow Bella got Jake good with that one lol :o) good chapter :):):D:D
| Robin.D chapter 47 . 12/9/2012
Jake is a girl lol ;o) poor Bella she did not know what Jasper was :o( good chapter :):):D:D
| Robin.D chapter 46 . 12/9/2012
oh wow poor Bella :o( good chapter :):):D:D