Reviews for His Room
Bitches-Love-Canons chapter 1 . 1/23/2012
VP4444 chapter 1 . 2/19/2011
ahhh. great story. hope you do more! bye!
yasyall23 chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
The best Twilight one shot I've read on fanfiction
twilightmom1 chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
Loved it!
pumpkinmykitty chapter 1 . 2/4/2010
Whoa, that was hot!
bloodthirsty4u chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
i like it
Jayboogie chapter 1 . 1/11/2010
Pretty intense! Loved it! Can you rewrite it from Edward's POV?
baruka athena chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
I love this story!

Write more of them please.
reeb.myoo chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
If this were to have happened in the books, this is exactly how I would have imagined it. To the T. It was freaking HOT, and beautifully written. For your first fanfic, this is incredible. Please keep writing, because you have serious talent there. That was seriously a freaking amazing story. You managed to capture Bella's personality (and even Edward's, but I mean Bella as the narrator) absolutely perfectly, and the narration made me feel as thouh I was in the books again, like it was a deleted scene of sorts. That was seriously a great, great story. Please write some more, PLEASE!
JD Thorn chapter 1 . 1/8/2010
Very good!
timidvampire chapter 1 . 1/8/2010
HeartOfDarkess chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
Very well written and descriptive. Nicely done. Loved the torture they went through and that it wasn't just about the sex. Keep em coming!
Rose Argeneau chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
This story was well written i can honestly imagine that situation happening. Thanks for the story. It was amazing.
404 Account Removed chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
amazing, i just wish this had more reviews than it does.. people really should leave their comments on here.. love it, really. good job.
stephivass chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
Ok I have to say, if Edward gave in at this moment during Twilight then I believe that is how it truly would have gone. You did such a great job describing that animalistic pull of his, and the desperation of Bella. All in all just wow, that was wonderfully done.
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