|Reviews for Another Beginning|
| D10g3n3s chapter 3 . 11/25
A great story, but you need to work on your grammar. The mistakes tend to take away from the entertainment of the story. Work on sentence structure and you'll have a great read.
| kirsty21 chapter 38 . 11/17
| sjrodgers23 chapter 38 . 11/12
loved this story thank you
| Sugar.Addicted.Dreamer08 chapter 38 . 10/23
OMG! I adore you. you have no idea how much. I, for some reason, don't like the Edward/Harry pairing but throughout the whole entirety of the story, my mother was constantly yelling at me to shut up because I kept having fangirl moments. I cried, I laughed, I imagined, and by god did I squeal my heart out and have to take a few steps away from my phone. I'm definitely about to go check out your other stories. Seriously, thank you for writing this. You made me see a new side to the crossover and I just ador it. Oh! and the slight (?) Bella Bashing was perfect. Thank you! XOXO, Sugar.
| rmosmi chapter 20 . 10/18
The story is good but the writing style is too childish. I felt like I was reading a sappy story written by a 11 years old kid who have no knowledge of how to write a fiction. Sorry, but you did ask for reviews , so I gave you one.
| Aquana chapter 26 . 9/26
how the bloody hell can someone destroy Aston Martin Vanquish?! It should be illegal! if u want to destroy it just so a person who owns that car cant use it, u can give it to ME! That car ... AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH Aston Martin Vanquish
| Aquana chapter 19 . 9/26
the very Last scene of this chapter
| staretoile chapter 38 . 8/25
I really loved reading your story! It is great. Poor Weasleys what their parents and brother did to them i s so horrible. Nice that Severus gets a second chance. I hope he finds his significant other. Harry and Edward are such a cute couple!
| Guest chapter 31 . 8/18
Of course you need permission! You have to pay for that shit, lol, can you imagine, not signing for a big surgery and then when asked to pay say 'I never wanted that, sorry, no dolla dolla" Lol
| atlantis51 chapter 38 . 8/4
As always, from you, an amazing story!
| lol787 chapter 38 . 7/4
Very good story. Very interesting.
| Stasia Ravenclaw chapter 38 . 5/16
| suziq968 chapter 18 . 5/11
I'm enjoying this except for when you contradict yourself. Lily said Albus was the secret keeper. There's also the thing where Harry could hear thoughts and you just stopped it. I get using occlumency to block but he could have used it to listen in on Albus etc. I know there are more but it is easier to block them. I like your writing so I'm just pumping up the denial of reality that you wrote and staying in the moment but there are some huge discrepancies going on.
| animeromance1972 chapter 29 . 4/25
I WAS SO ANGRY WHEN BELLA DESTROYED HARRY'S PHOTOS AND BROOM!AND I CRIED WHEN HARRY COULDN'T!
| NorbertFeedMe chapter 38 . 1/2
Loved this story, I loved the way u portrayed the Cullens and the scene with Bella smashing up everything me start laughing like a maniac! Superb, well done.