Reviews for Another Beginning |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hawesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() HAHA! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() HAHA |
![]() ![]() ![]() God I hope she gets eaten. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Keep it up |
![]() ![]() ![]() looks interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoying it |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWESOME |
![]() ![]() ![]() This looks awesome. |
![]() ![]() If Snape thought of Harry as a son, he wouldn't have cast Crucio on him out of anger. All you had to do was write that he cast it lightly while he tried to find a credible way get Harry out. |
![]() ![]() I really enjoyed it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A great story, but you need to work on your grammar. The mistakes tend to take away from the entertainment of the story. Work on sentence structure and you'll have a great read. |