Reviews for Choices
PastOneonta chapter 1 . 6/23
This is very good. It's good to read a story where Peter faces the way Neal is viewed by the FBI. He is treated like a criminal that they let out of prison to use, without regard for humanity and the person. Neal is expendable, he is the one who was supposed to get shot because Peter is more valuable. Neal is not an agent. I was pleased with Jones' conversation with Peter and Peter's decision to stay with Neal. The rest of the FBI can go back to work on the case.

I appreciated Neal's conversation with Peter when he woke up. Neal, as miserable as he is feeling, has no regrets. So the relationship develops. I am looking forward to seeing what else you far written.
ZoePerja chapter 1 . 3/5
Fantastic! well written, and a lot of fun to read! !
ayjaydee chapter 1 . 10/17/2015
Loved this! I love reviewing older stories and getting reviews on my older stuff. People should do that more often.

I just got into White Collar about a month ago and I saw that you had written some stories for this fandom, which made me super happy because I'm in love with these characters. All of their relationships are so layered, especially between Peter and Neal. But even with their trust issues, there's still that brotherly love between them. I think you expressed that perfectly in this fic, especially for early season 1.

I'm more partial to Peter whump, which is rare in this fandom, but I don't mind some Neal whump from time to time. :)

Thanks for the story!
Sailor Pandabear chapter 1 . 9/27/2015
nice
3DPhantom chapter 1 . 7/21/2015
Aww. So sweet. Poor Neal!

I like guns. I just don't like psychos, or stupid people, or people in general...

Good story. :3
Guest chapter 1 . 1/17/2015
Loved it! Great characterization and interaction between the Peter and Neal!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/5/2015
This was a very sweet story. I like the way that you developed the characters while still keeping their actions and interactions realistic, and I really like your interpretation of Neal and his motivations. I think it's a very believable explanation for his actions, particularly during the first season. Thank you for sharing this story, and God bless!
kurarisusa chapter 1 . 2/12/2014
This. Was. Beautiful. I loved it!
luvtheheaven chapter 1 . 12/2/2013
Aw wow. The end of this fic was making me cry. This whole thing was so good. ;)
sami1010220 chapter 1 . 2/6/2013
Aww, that was great!
All.Is.Now.Harmed chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
Loved it! Superb.
Meyli Vaisyl chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
Excellent! This story is just great! I love it!
Happy new year,
Meyli.
Hieiko chapter 1 . 11/18/2012
So much love for this fic.
wotumba1 chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
don't really know what to say...
wonderful story, perfectly written...
loved it!
LisaRosa chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
I know you wrote this a few years ago, but I just wanted to send you a review. This is a very well written story. It flows nicely and you kept Neal and Peter in character at the same time. The only thing that I could see that it needed was a little more dialogue. Not a whole lot, but some that shows more of Peter's emotions. Otherwise it's a very good story.
Lisa :)
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