Reviews for Closure
Billie Marie chapter 5 . 11/29/2010
Please continue with this story. It's great.
takers dark lover chapter 5 . 3/12/2010
Poor Hunter he knows Shawn loves Bret more and that is killing him. What will happen now that he has talked to Bret? Well I hope for a update real soon.
KakashiXIrukaLover chapter 5 . 3/8/2010
Poor Hunter...Shawn needs to get his closure with Bret so they all can be happy! Can't wait for the next update!
HelHound chapter 5 . 3/6/2010
Dun Dun Dun.

I can't wait for the continuation on this story. It's epic to say the very least.

I'm very picky about how some of my favorite wrestlers are wrote out and played but this is good, seems to catch the inner turmoil on everyone's part. Including past and present, bravo.
BellaHickenbottom chapter 5 . 2/26/2010
Aw Hunter is almost as perfect as Shawn is ;) I love how all he cares about is Shawn's happiness and I do love Shawn with Bret but it will kill me if Hunter gets hurt too! Aww, ur tearing me apart here LOL. IDK who I'm gonna cheer for but hopefully I won't feel too sad after he chooses.

BTW, Love how all the chapters start with C!
NeroAnne chapter 5 . 2/24/2010
I just realized all your chapter start with a "C." XD!

Story:

LOOK! XD! It's Scott Hall!

King Kong legs, XD! WOOT!

TACO GRANDE 3!

LMAO. Scott Hall is way too good at rocking insults, XD!

X3! They're humping. XD!

Shawn is such a slut!

0_0..OMG..

Awe...Hunt's not into it. Cheer up, big guy.

XP! LUCK bullshit, XD!

Ahh...XD!

Awe...

Just how does he indeed.

Great chapter!
wrestlefan4 chapter 5 . 2/24/2010
Ooh so so good! Emotion! Aw, poor Hunter. He really seemed to kind of get jerked around whether Shawn meant to or not. I love how you do Kevin and Scott they're cute and they always make me laugh.

Oh man, Shawn has to chose? Between Hunter and Bret!

*is on edge of seat*

AH!

Great job-I can not wait for the next!
redsandman99 chapter 5 . 2/24/2010
Aw, I feel so bad for Hunter. I just want to give him a hug.
slashburd chapter 5 . 2/24/2010
I don't know if I'm meant to be teary eyed at the end of that ch, but either way, I am.

That's another damn fine chapter of the story, everything about it seems so real and so raw. The whole scene with Bret/Shawn felt just like I was actually watching it happen. Not that that's a bad thing, of course.

I loved it as ever, another awesome piece of writing :)
Esha Napoleon chapter 5 . 2/24/2010
Beautiful ;)
BellaHickenbottom chapter 4 . 1/30/2010
OMG! Mental images of the pole dancing makes me a very happy lil fangirl! I liked it when they were comfortable with each other but every time it got awkward I was sad. I have to say I am kinda proud of Hunter to at least realize what's going on and not completely freak out! I hope this turns out well! Right now I'm really loving ur story considering Heart to Hart is apparently dwindling down!
Dark Kaneanite chapter 4 . 1/27/2010
I would, for the record, love to see Bret Hart pole dancing, and I can see Shawn pulling out his wallet and tossing dollars at him xD

These men are going to be the death of one another, Hunter is going to kill Bret, and Bret is going to kill Shawn, then Hunter is going to lose his mind and off himself so he can keep them apart in the after life.

Rofl Nattie for threatening them. That was gold and I can actually see her acting like that. It kinda makes me wonder what her and Tyson's relationship is like. Colon's! ftfw. I 3 Primo and the corrilation between Hunter and Carlito was perfectly awesome.
NeroAnne chapter 4 . 1/26/2010
OMG...things are going down. Bret actually talked to the Shawny!

Poor Hunter! XD! He's so miserable! BUT..Shawn biting on him like that could prove to be a great distraction from what he's gonna do, XD!

What an odd group of people to find them..XD!

Oh look! XD! Natalya!

And there comes Bret. XD! I go with Hunter's being late theory, XD!

0_0 they are alone...

Well, they seem to b enjoying that convo...Shawn hasn't gotten raped yet, XD!

..Bret dancing HAH!

Hit it man...XD! LMAO!

I like it...

XD! I hate myself for it, but I like it.
XxShawns Guardian AngelxX chapter 4 . 1/25/2010
I dont know why I didnt get the alert this time. UGH! FK it all ff.

This was another brilliant chapter. Very sweet and poor Hunter's just watching him slip away again.

This has got to be one of the world's worst love triangles especially if you're a fan of both pairings. (Im starting to hate them both so I'm not biased at all. Ha Ha Go me!)

Love your Nattie. She's so damn scary!

Not sure how I feel about danin Bret but it makes me LOL. And they are so in serious denial. Thats whats wrong with Hunter these days. He's usual the Rumble as an excuse but he fears The Bret and The Undertaker. Bwahahaha
redsandman99 chapter 4 . 1/25/2010
Wow, this fic just keeps getting better and better. I love the whole pole dancing bit. That was priceless.
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