|Reviews for Lost in Stereo|
| Aunty Soshul chapter 3 . 2/27/2011
| jackpot7374 chapter 3 . 1/22/2010
Can't wait for the next installment. Hope it comes as quickly as this short story did.
| Vile Shadow chapter 2 . 1/17/2010
Hey, M. Brief as it was, it was nice to peer into the earlier lives of brother & sister. The scenes b/t these two characters, IMO, are the strength of your story, and should remain the primary focus.
The biggest irk I had with this chapter was the "Miles away" line. Apart from being too vague, it is out of place, and should've been placed at the end of the chapter to serve as a cliffhanger. Speaking of which, I must say I enjoyed the ending to this chapter. Leaves me looking forward to the next.
| Sharnorasian Empire chapter 2 . 1/17/2010
Interesting story, I look forwards to more
| jackpot7374 chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
Nice MB. I liked Radio Free also. How many chapters are you planning for this short story? Keep it up!
| Vile Shadow chapter 1 . 1/11/2010
Hey, M. . Well, the story's not off to a bad start. The characters are likable, and there seems to be good chemistry b/t them. The synopsis could use some clarification, but nothing that a few minutes can't cure. Should you be unsure as what to add in your next chapter, I would suggest a prologue, just something that would add a bit of b/g to your characters.
Once again, a good start. Will be sure to check out the next entry. If I like what I read, another review will follow.