|Reviews for Inevitable|
| ube9 chapter 6 . 5/11/2010
I like this story and decided to follow up every chapter that you'll be updating. Thanks for sharing.
| CRISTIMONTES chapter 6 . 5/11/2010
really like the whole storyy!
keep writing u are awesomee
| onetwoskidoooo chapter 6 . 5/11/2010
It's wonderfully written!
Update soon :)
| you know who chapter 6 . 5/11/2010
amazing! i really like it.
i can't wait to see what else you've written!
good work :)
| movies2560 chapter 6 . 5/11/2010
Great chapter. Keep updating. Oh! and thank you, friend that bought lemonschlemon (Michelle?) the Starbucks tumbler. lol I don't drink coffee but if i ever did, i'd want one. ;) lol
| SabLuvsLogan chapter 6 . 5/11/2010
Great update, open mic night was an interesting moment for them..wonder what Ben was thinking during the performance. Can't wait for the next update :D
| carla304 chapter 5 . 3/30/2010
Great story :) very sweet and refreashing to read. Hope to read more soon!
| TalksToMirrors chapter 5 . 3/29/2010
Great chapter! Are you going to write the song lyrics? I always thought that was only for short chapters to make it seem longer? Love this story, great chapters! Can't wait for all the secrets to come out and for them to realize they love each other... cause they are going to realize it, right? I changed my mind, please don't tell me! I bet u weren't even contemplating telling me but still... I'm wierd, and now I'm stupid when I pointed it out!
Love the story, and will keep on reading if you keep on writing!
This review was for the long A/N notes... wich i love...
| Miss F Cullen chapter 5 . 3/29/2010
I did enjoy it; a lot! Well done!
| lore191 chapter 5 . 3/28/2010
i love this chapter! they are getting closer and closer... and finally the next chapter edward will meet ben!
ps: sorry for no review before, my spelling is not so good... also my language is spanish :D
| Btvs89 chapter 5 . 3/28/2010
Your chapter here : awesome! They're so fucked up, pardon my languages LOL!
Can't wait to re&ad the next.
| RosAlice22 chapter 5 . 3/28/2010
What a great chapter! :D
Really, I loved it... And, don't worry about profanity, I think it looks good at the end...
As ussually, I apologize for my grammar, I'm still learning. So, you maybe have to try hard to understand this xD
Please don't take too long for updating. Intrigue it's good, but I was desesperate xD. Just kidding. I know it's difficult, and I enjoyed this chapter :). Yeah, I know: what kind of freak enjoy sadness? Well, me, just sometimes, like this, when it is well done, and doesn't look like a "telenovela" xD
I really hope you could understand this review... I'm from Venezuela, so, obviously, my language it's spanish :D
Well, see you on the next update!
Huggs and kisses!
| Anne chapter 5 . 3/28/2010
Wow, very well written! can't wait to read the next chapter
| Miss Pepper Potts chapter 2 . 3/28/2010
Awh, Bella should really tell Edward the truth.
| FoodForThought2127 chapter 5 . 3/28/2010
Please write more. This is a very interesting story.