Reviews for Inevitable
got99problems chapter 16 . 7/10/2011
Wow, so much has happened..I cant believe Charlie died :( But Im glad they finally moved in together and there gonna do the dirty deed ;) lol amazing chapter.
weekitty chapter 16 . 7/10/2011
LiLi82 chapter 16 . 7/10/2011
love it
SabLuvsLogan chapter 16 . 7/10/2011
Great update poor Charlie :'( yay for a&j's wedding and yay for b&e finally doing the deed ;) Can't wait for the next update
eli-rose chapter 15 . 6/17/2011
So this is The End?
Guest chapter 15 . 6/16/2011
I finally made it through the whole story. I have two main points, and you'll probably dislike the second, but here goes:

1) Your premise and plot are SO much fun. I absolutely love the storyline you've thought up here.

2) You need a beta reader.

Don't get me wrong, it's a good story - but your word choice needs some help. Sometimes you're confusing similar words and it's very distracting for the reader. There are lots of folks out there who will beta for you, and you'll end up with a more polished story which more people will read all the way through.

One other thing. This is the funniest, coolest line I've read today:

"I woke slowly to feel soft bedding, plush and warm. It screamed thread count. Definitely not mine." Such classic Bella. I love it.

Overall, great story! Thank you for sharing it. :)
magmom2 chapter 15 . 6/16/2011
I remember parts but I guess we will kind of be starting a new life, so to speak.
Inlovewith Imortals chapter 15 . 6/16/2011
I am so loving this story! It is different from the others that I've read. I love that Bella and Ben were able to end their relationship on a positive note. And I can't wait to hear the rest of the story on Edward's Tattoos! Please continue to write and be inspired by what's around you. V**V
Btvs89 chapter 15 . 6/16/2011
Awwww, it's such a sweet chapter !

Worth the wait ! I love it XD

Take Care. Maud.
SabLuvsLogan chapter 15 . 6/16/2011
Great update, glad she was able to close that chapter with Ben easily. Looking forward to the next update :)
xxxbulletxxx chapter 15 . 6/16/2011
I actually almost deleted this story a few weeks ago. I'm glad I didn't because I really want to see it to the ending.
JustAmber chapter 14 . 12/28/2010
Such a sweet chapter and worth the wait. I love reading how their relationship is progressing and I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)
RosAlice22 chapter 14 . 11/20/2010
You know I have no problem if you take a long time to update, I know you'll update, eventually. I can't criticize, I've been there a lot of times. Uni, homework and my own life don't let me write or do anything I would love to do.

About this chapter... Aww! Girl, you're making me smile. I love this Edward, he's not that criptic anymore, he's opening now for Bella and it's good to see it. Plus, is good to know the bad days are over by now :)

Can you send this message? "Edward, marry me". That's it. I love that tall, handsome, red-haired man, his tattoos and all of his issues *sigh*. Kiddin'. I still have a life and I hope for my ideal one. I know it's not gonna be Edward, i'm not waiting for that.

Well, my dear Michelle, I really enjoyed this one. Good to know the update is coming soon :D

Did i say that i love you? 'cause i do and you're great :)


eli-rose chapter 14 . 11/19/2010
:)i loved it...
cantgetenoughmusic9 chapter 14 . 11/19/2010
It was great as always, but please update faster!
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