Reviews for Good Girl
RoNask chapter 1 . 4/2
I'd like to applaud the way you bought up the issue of consent and BDSM, we never talk about it and you did. You did a very good job on pointing out the difference between abuse and a consensual play. As for the rest I liked it, it's different from what we get out of the sweet Gillian image and it is in character, which makes your fanfic very impressive and very delightful.
Thank you for sharing this piece with us.
yuiop chapter 1 . 1/2/2015
michkapish chapter 1 . 11/7/2012
Guest chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
First of all, let me just say: UHNN. yes, please. Please.
Now that that's off my plate,
Wow. That was. Just. The most amazing Dom I have read in a very very long time. Absolutely sexy as hell. This fic just hit evey button I had and also some I never even knew I had. That teasing to get Cal dark enough to go all the way: yes please. So sexy.
Excuse me as I fangirl some more.
I don't even think I have the right to comment on the writing. You are an amazing author. All of them were incredibly in character and Cal's Dom side was both realistic and believable.
Just, yes. Please.
Lover's Reason chapter 1 . 3/31/2012
Well, here it is: the holy grail of authorship. Your writing changed my life. Not in a huge way, but I read this and all I could think was, "Yes. This is *exactly* what I want my sex life to be." This was amazing, and I'm going to carry it with me for a long time.
Someonefromthefuture chapter 1 . 1/24/2012
The best story I have read in a long time! Totally in character, wonderful language and so convincing! Don't you dare ever delete the story - it would be such a loss! I absolutely love it!
lietomebaby chapter 1 . 3/8/2011
Wow! What a ride! think i'll go have a cigarette now, Whew!
lapeyre julie chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
i like so much this story even it's written in english (i'm french)
Ngurethos chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
I've never quite seen them as having this type of rough sex before, and I would have most likely avoided this fic altogether if it wasn't 4am and my judgment was shot to hell. (Along with wanting to read every M rated Callian fic...)

Most fanfiction I have read with BDSM or some such thing is always between characters that are generally bad themselves; or rather ones that you can see such a attitude with. (Example: Albert Wesker from Resident Evil) Cal and Gillian I could see in a very light relationship of this nature, but never quite this deep.

That being said, I was more then proven wrong when I read this. The feelings of tenderness that are woven throughout the whole 'dirty' action makes this seem so human and just...right. Cal is truly a fantastic guy, even if he is a bad boy or bastard. It shows through so wonderfully in the show with his interactions with his daughter as well as his affection towards Gillian. It's something many fics don't capture and yet you did, even with the whole BSDM thing there as well.

So even if this sort of action, for me, isn't my cup of tea for the two of them, I absolutely love this to pieces. It was brilliant and raw and absolutely astounding. Fantastic job! It was an amazing read.
RyanThorpe chapter 1 . 12/11/2010
Er... WOAH! I don't think i can find the right words to describe this... it was just so totally HAWT! Also loved the Emily/Gillian bonding moments... cute...

I need an icy shower...
Calculated Artificiality chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
oh, okay, just kidding. i want to marry THIS story.
WheresUrMoose chapter 1 . 8/30/2010
Well was wonderfully detailed romps between those two.
Moune chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
this story is really a pure pleasure. I think I must take a shower. A cold one. OMG. You're really amazing. I need more stories like that ! So if you don't know what to do in the next days... ;-) please feel free to write another one ! You make my day... and my night ! Bravo !

And if anyone knows a good forum for lie to me, please send me an email, I'm searching for one !
smiles chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
OMG Perfection
LolaRedMuse chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
you would think that BDSM is kinda too much for LTM fanfics...but no, this 1 was sheer perfection in a very kinky sort of way. great job! keep it up!
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