|Reviews for As Long As I'm Around|
| jennytork chapter 1 . 1/6
I really liked this!
| Sphinxius chapter 1 . 12/18/2013
I know this story was posted almost four years ago (just a few weeks shy of!) but I had to say that I thoroughly loved it. What a read! Your writing is just...wow, and this story was equally wow. One of the best I've ever read. I mean it!
| Stoney Angel chapter 1 . 11/10/2013
Awwww that was lovely. And I loved it. xo
| twinklingeyes07 chapter 1 . 8/15/2013
| Engxty Piksy chapter 1 . 7/14/2013
I seriously don't have words. This was beautiful! Thank you for sharing such a perfect piece of writing! :)
| Alex L. Kerr chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
This was really entertaining! I liked the duffel-discovery scene - it was a great, unique & plausible way for Dean to find out Sam had never left.
| Samstruck chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
| T.L. Arens chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
Your narrative was awesome! Your descriptions kept me glued to the proverbial page and I think I'll have to see what else you've written because you write like a professional! I love how you took the characters seriously and not only did you allow the reader to see what was in the character's heads, but also in their environment and I do not encounter that very often.
your use of italics made the story super easy to read and created wonderful transitions from one scene and thought to another so that I did not have to do any guess work.
Dean finding Sam's duffel in the backseat was such a great moment that I think I'll reread it. I loved how you used Baby's condition and appearence to represent Dean's inner turmoil and the condition of his soul. Brilliant. I'm looking forward to other stories! :D
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
I know this is an old story but i just found it. This was FAN freaking tastic! thanks so much for sharing this great story!
| JaniceC678 chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
Wow! That was just WONDERFUL! I needed a relatively quick fix of Winchesters this morning, and this fit the bill beautifully! Pain...angst...love...what more can one ask for?
(Of course, if it HAD been a monster rather than a hit-and-run, Dean could have heaped even MORE guilt on himself for not having been there to have Sam's back - that's always fun, LOL!)
But seriously, Awesome story!
| lillelouis chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
Broke my heart and taped it back together again.
| wInChEsTeR bRoS iNc chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
I CAN'T EVEN
| ILBS chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
I love your story! (I think Ive already read the story at least three times - within the last two weeks...)
Its really good written and I can exactly "see" the whole story while reading!
| ArmedWithMyComputer chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
Hey :) I just found this story, and I really like it! Great job :D
| mzz chapter 1 . 5/7/2011
great story, love this part:
"Dean..." It was hopeless and pointless and he couldn't help it, the moan that escaped him or the futile grasping of empty fingers.
He'd been unanswered for so long. He'd reached so many times for a hand that wasn't there.
And then fingers met his, calloused and strong, and his hand was suddenly warm in a familiar hard grip. He heard it, the voice he'd called for. Not angry; not threatening; the voice of security and protection. Of love.
Oww that was beautifully written!
hey! Can I ask you something?
So Sam did left the motel for to look for his girlfriend's killer,? but then he came back, right? But, When did Sam leave his duffle in the Impala? Did Dean go to the bar on foot and left the Impala in the motel? There is when Sam left his duffle in the Impala? And then Sam went to look for his brother to the bar and there was when he went run over. Am I right? sorry for my english is not my first language...