Reviews for The Words I Can Not Speak
suns and stars chapter 1 . 10/31/2011
this was well done I have done little mermaid story of my own that you are welcome to read if you wish
Maryanne Jarvey chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
So cute! I loved it! :D
xdeletedaccountx chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
good job. please add more!:)
TTCyclone chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
lol CLIFF HANGER! CRUSES! This is a wonderful description of this scene! Great Job! :D
BunniGirl chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
Wonderful.
Converse r life chapter 1 . 1/8/2010
I loved this! Oh please continue! I want to know what happens next! PLEASE!
HermioneLennon chapter 1 . 1/8/2010
Present tense works! I hope you carry out your plans to add more! :D
xJadeRainx chapter 1 . 1/8/2010
Excellent! I've always wanted to write something like this, but I never got around to it. You did an amazing job, though. SO romantic! I was holding my breath along with Ariel. It is difficult to write in this tense, (I have a story of my own written in this manner) but you pulled it off nicely.

xJadeRainx

Keep us the good work!
elizabeth's lullaby chapter 1 . 1/8/2010
Beautiful! Such a nice chapter! I LOVE disneys... especially this one :D

In answer to your private message:

My name does come slightly from Pride and Predjudice; which film do you prefer? The BBC Or Keira Knightley version?

Oh, and 'Lullaby' is just completely made up! I wanted it to be musical... cause it's part of wahat I am.

Lizzy xx