Reviews for Goodnight, Noises Everywhere
BellaTesoro chapter 5 . 6/18/2019
So now she remembers the one time she met Edward but thinks her mind made him up?
BellaTesoro chapter 4 . 6/18/2019
Oh so Edward is a vampire and Bella is very surprised. How did she know there were vampires in the world? And why isn't Edward or the other vampires drinking from animals at least? And in that same vein, why doesn't Bella find, hunt, fish for animals in her area?
BellaTesoro chapter 3 . 6/18/2019
I'm intrigued by the description of the man who appeared as Bella compares him to the statue. He seems to know her but she doesn't seem to know this man who I assume is Edward.
BellaTesoro chapter 2 . 6/18/2019
I can't imagine watching everyone die before your very eyes, and now it's just you, alone in the world. I hope Bella finds it in herself to find ways to survive, get water from a nearby source, grown vegetables, etc. I'm guessing Edward isn't far away somewhere.
BellaTesoro chapter 1 . 6/18/2019
Oh my, this story is going to break my heart I see. Interesting premise though and I'm interested to see if Bella regains some strength and will to survive, alone for now.
GUEST chapter 1 . 4/11/2019
I hope she finds some one else. Is she still in high school?
leesmee chapter 25 . 2/21/2019
That was so deep . I had to take breaks. Beautifully written. But dark Thank you .
first-aday chapter 1 . 6/8/2018
This story utterly destroyed me. Cheers.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/27/2018
It's so sad why they have to die? I thought maybe there will be some twist in fate or something
Alice's White Rabbit chapter 25 . 5/8/2018
Okay, so I'm very late to this party (and you probably don't even look at this account anymore), but I just wanted to say how much I loved reading this story. Even though I knew how it would end, it still had me sitting on the edge of my seat (and in tears so many times), waiting to see "how" it would end. But, I was so glad Bella and Edward were together at the end.

Thanks!
Sally
bannerday chapter 25 . 5/2/2018
Amazing. Truly. I've avoided reading this fic for years. The post-apocalyptic thing isn't generally my thing. But now I'm so glad I finally read this. I always appreciate a good turn of phrase and vivid descriptions, but more than the beauty of your words, I found the expression of your thoughts particularly compelling.
I'll be thinking of this story for a long time to come.
kezcullen chapter 25 . 3/22/2018
what a spectacular ending! i have just read this straight through and enjoyed it so much. the psychology of the characters was well developed in an interesting way.
homiegdawggirl chapter 25 . 2/8/2018
Wow! That was... words can’t describe. You could make this an actual novel imo. I really enjoyed it. Thank you for writing it!
Guest chapter 25 . 1/24/2018
I had never read any other story like this. I really enjoyed it.
anarchyforherchaos chapter 25 . 1/3/2018
I did not sleep last night. Thank you for this beautifully tragic story! I had just finished a series of stories and was looking for something different when this caught my eye. The quality your writing is top notch. This story was emotional, a little macabre, a lot depressing, but so good that I read it in one sitting (hence the no sleep thing). You are so talented. Never stop sharing your gift with the world, hun.

XO Anarchy
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