Reviews for Serving
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 9 . 8/28/2012
Hehe humans can be very curious.

How come Chrono didn't told her about his time freezing powers? That's one of his most dangerous and awesome abilities XD
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 8 . 8/28/2012
NUUUUUU why did Joshua had to die TT. Poor Rosette, well at least Chrono is nice enough to take care of her... and not like a pet XD. So does that mean that Chrono will take Rosette to Pandemonium?
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 7 . 8/28/2012
Wow he's really gone insane, so my first view of him wasn't that wrong. I hope Joshua won't get eaten. That will break Rosette's heart if she isn't the one to go before him.
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 6 . 8/28/2012
Hahah Chrono is lucky that he doesn't know how the human minds work in the present and especially the female ones. One walking bomb of emotions, many thoughts and mood swings and we refused to be bossed around XD.
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 5 . 8/28/2012
So I wasn't mistaken when I thought one of those council nuts acted as he's some pedo gay guy. XD Finally Rosette will have her answers soon.
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 4 . 8/28/2012
Good to know that her dad shows affection towards his kids. I thought he was some rich meanie who only cares abut money. XD good thing that's not the case. I wonder how Rosette will start her... research.
xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 3 . 8/28/2012
Chrono and Aion serving Rosette and Yoshua's family... that's interesting. I like this fic and I noticed that you spelled Aion wrong.
gemiinous chapter 9 . 10/18/2011
this is fascinating! though, while Chrno's in human form, is he young looking? like in most of the manga, or is he older?

please don't abandon this fic!
Dragoon-Yue chapter 9 . 3/31/2011
Well, I am liking this story rather alot and find it very interesting. I particularly like how Aion isn't the bad guy. I would, however, suggest that you go a little more into describing their actions and their environment, but that's probably my own personal bias talking. As for any grammatical errors... Well, you're doing better than most westerners (I took a look at your profile and saw that you're from Austria) with only a few minor mistakes.

If you find it to be a really big issue then I would suggest that you ask a native English-speaker to beta read your chapters. Or you could look for 'Baron's Painless Grammar'. Very useful book that makes grammar easy.

P.S. Please, please update soon!
nekoneko423 chapter 9 . 3/28/2011
plz continue!this is an awesome story so far and im wondering if she will be able to touch those beads;)lol, anyway im hopeing for an update soon and ik its been awhile cuz of the date posted but keep up to good work, your a great writer~
Aggression chapter 9 . 11/1/2010
Good story, and good grammer! I can't wait until the next chapter!
zalladane-icefire chapter 9 . 10/15/2010
update plz
Midnight Blackbird chapter 9 . 10/9/2010
great chapter :D

cliffhanger is killing me although .

Yes, I've missed your work. And I can't wait next update :)
binichan chapter 9 . 10/6/2010
great as accustomed ;)
Decepti-Jazz chapter 9 . 10/5/2010
Welcome back! I am glad to see an update. I find their relationship to be interesting. For my own personal taste: Rosette still seems a little bit of a damsel. But considering the horrible incident, I can understand it. I am excited for the next chapter.
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