Reviews for The Crusade
Guest chapter 1 . 6/13/2012
Im going to work backwards first off or should I say last off I don't understand the lines "may the unity be with my husband" from my understanding the unity will always be with him as he himself is a part of the unities being from what I can make of the advent they are while individual beings with free thought and action also part of a hive collective oneness with all other advent. Secondly I love the mystic ranking systems and names you used thy made the advent seem deeper as a culture. I do think though that you shouldn't have called the TEC the TEC as chances are the advent have no idea about the Human Vasari war as most of their revenge prophecies are just prophecies and I don't think they've had any real contact with humanity since their expulsion from it. anyway nice quick read thanks
Rhavis chapter 1 . 2/22/2010
I liked it. Hope you make more