|Reviews for Wizards are stupid|
| KarisTasogare chapter 21 . 7/8
only one problem here: if Snape died, then who told Volde the prophecy? and if no one told him then there wodul be no need for a secret enough I can see possibilitys here, ones where volde is killed that Halloween night and ones where the war goes very differnmtly. perhaps one day.
| JoshRand1982 chapter 24 . 6/23
I wonder how the use of a Nuke even if it was low end was explained to the rest of the world?
| sasha1213 chapter 12 . 6/21
Haha, I love that Ron. It's a pity he died(
| GuesssWho chapter 23 . 4/26
My theory is that it's a kelpie
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/26
That was kind of horrible, you know that?
| thonez chapter 26 . 4/25
| thonez chapter 25 . 4/25
| thonez chapter 24 . 4/25
| thonez chapter 21 . 4/25
Also JKR writings, she found that Snape is too evil so she tried to fix it by making marauders evil. With schizoprenic personality between books its better just ignore inconsistent scenes like this.
| thonez chapter 18 . 4/25
Also its mainly Dumbles error. For example he could space-extend Harrys room and use guards to train Harry instead wasting time. Also blood protections are unclear, DE could pick younger Harry at school.
| thonez chapter 16 . 4/25
Perfect, essence of bad time-travel fics where they do everything to preserve timeline. Sadly these stories would be better with time-travel omitted with simple modifications like casting legimens to scar for finding Horcruxes.
As Dumbledore your view is mainly determined by idealistic/realistic analysis.
JKR wrote his dialogues as kind grandfather. This is idealistic version.
Realistic comes from analysis when writing fanfic and wait-what moments. JKR wrote him as plot device so there are tons of such moments, see ARedHair profile. Only explanations of his characters are insane or incompetent or evil.
His main problem is that he doesn't do anything. In ten years before Harry's school he didn't do anything about death eaters and Snape making DEjungen. How would you explain that?
Snape problem is that JKR made him evil in first six books. Then she decided for ass-pull to make him good guy in book 7. Also analyzing his action makes him lot viler, like that he betrayed Harry by keeping information about department of mysteries for five hours and other unintentional problems. Also he doesn't do anything as spy until book 7.
| thonez chapter 15 . 4/25
nice, you could get followup where ron turns into carp
| thonez chapter 14 . 4/25
| thonez chapter 12 . 4/25
thats sorta covered in hpmor. As perpetum mobile its magic. You can have story with it.
| thonez chapter 11 . 4/25
yes, just bad math. Fanfic should set galleon to more than gold due anti-tampering enchantments.