|Reviews for An Unexpected Detour|
| Guest chapter 6 . 2/18
| IceDragon1095 chapter 6 . 8/11/2010
Isn't that just like the Doctor, getting himself hurt while saving someone else. Although I really think that the Narnians shouldn't be distrusting him so musch after how he saved Caspian...that's really mean of them...
| Nimbus Llewelyn chapter 6 . 6/15/2010
Keep going this is excellent.
| Artemis Holmes chapter 6 . 4/17/2010
I can't wait!
| Pandagirl66 chapter 6 . 2/22/2010
In my opinion, this was a great chapter,other than the fact that it's been FOREVER! but, really, you've got me worried about the Doctor. and Peter needs to get some patience, lol. update soon! pretty please?
| FaktCheker chapter 5 . 2/21/2010
Please continue! This story is nice!
| AkuEponineHughes chapter 5 . 2/16/2010
This is getting better with every chapter. :) Good concept.
| debookworm01 chapter 5 . 2/12/2010
Woah! This story is really good! MEGA cliffy! PLEASE CONTINUE/UPDATE SOON!
| Pandagirl66 chapter 5 . 2/8/2010
ohmygod. the Doctor got shot with an arrow, hardly suptising really, its not like he'd just let it hhappen to someone else, yet i cannot picture 10 with arrows sticking out of him. anyway, this story is great and i hope you'll update very soon.
| Lynse chapter 5 . 2/5/2010
"The Doctor looked back and saw that the centaur was staring right at him with a look of disgust on his Doctor turned his head back.
Darn centaurs. Never forget anything, he thought grimly to himself."
My favourite lines. I wasn't able to suppress a laugh, so fortunately I am currently alone. Only way to improve said lines? Inserting 'face. The' between 'his Doctor'. There are a couple places where you're missing words like that. It's a bit hard to catch yourself, since if you're like me, you read them in when you read it over, but it's something to watch out for.
| Mystic Lover of the fairytale chapter 4 . 1/27/2010
Can't wait for the next chapter,excitement is in the air .
| Mystic Lover of the fairytale chapter 2 . 1/14/2010
I do hope the kids meet the Doctor and Rose please say they will oh that would be cool if they did
| Runescribe chapter 2 . 1/12/2010
This isn't too long for a chapter, don't worry about that. Between one and two thousand words is usually a good length.
| Runescribe chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
Doctor Who and Narnia? Alright, I'm interested.
| spider-pony32 chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
Great start keep writing.