Reviews for Indian Summer
MangaGrl2665 chapter 26 . 12/15/2014
I can't stop giggling. My roommate must think I'm nuts...
Guest chapter 73 . 9/3/2014
I don''t understand what's the problem with vapires drinking human blood ? Demetri and FĂ©lix are very OCC in your story. Human can be more cruel than vampire: they destroy the planet, they rape, they killed...
natcityjp chapter 9 . 7/28/2014
Sweet, Leah finally meet her imprint! I really like this story so far, and the new history is cool.
Amineh1825 chapter 73 . 4/4/2014
Why should they return?
Amineh1825 chapter 67 . 4/4/2014
Is there no sequel? Didn't you finish telling of what is going to happen in the Amazon?
Amineh1825 chapter 49 . 4/3/2014
That's too bad you didn't include the trip.
ilovebooks1111 chapter 73 . 8/24/2013
Wow! Seriously awesome! I'm at a loss for words!
LordXeenTheGreat chapter 9 . 4/7/2012
Awesome Cliffy!
LordXeenTheGreat chapter 8 . 4/7/2012
Awesome Chapter!
LordXeenTheGreat chapter 7 . 4/7/2012
Awesome Chapter!
LordXeenTheGreat chapter 6 . 4/7/2012
Awesome Chapter!
LordXeenTheGreat chapter 5 . 4/7/2012
Great Chapter!
LordXeenTheGreat chapter 4 . 4/7/2012
Awesome Chapter!
SGAmvmm chapter 63 . 3/17/2012
..I'm just starting to read fanfics of twilight.. this one is really long.. This chapter made me think of Stargate Atlantis.. That one was the reason I'm reading fanfics.. ).. Maybe you could try to read some of it or watch the show.. John Sheppard and Dr. Mckay are great characters for fanfics.. If I have the skills I want to make a crossover between twilight and Stargate Atlantis.. I love how you come up with this stories that blend well with Cullens as well as the others.. I love how you inlcuded Charlie's POV in what is happening around him.. Nessie and Charlie's relationship is really great.. ). Thank you for this wonderful story..
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 73 . 3/3/2012

I really did love your story! I like reading long stories so I don't finish them all too quickly. lol

As I read, I was writing down things to say...

Firstly, I loved the excuse Emmett gave in the beginning about Bella and Edward, and how it was carried on. It was a joke but you didn't seem to say "do you see what I did there?" if that makes sense... I also enjoyed your good descriptions of everything, and it was a relief to find a story that actually had good grammar.

If I had been writing this story, I wouldn't have made the chapters into parts, and I would have made the epilogue into another few chapters, but that's just me. In my opinion, epilogues are usually uneventful, but their purpose is to look into the lives of the people in the story a bit farther in the future. Also, I think the part about her dad finally finding out she was a vampire was good, but I would suggest that you put it together more. I'm not sure if I remember right, but he told her that he knew in the epilogue, and he learned about it at the end of the story. I might have added it to the end of the chapter or made it a new one.

I really did love your story (despite the way you divided the chapters)! You're a great writer!

Tarah xXx
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