|Reviews for Fifty|
| Codename Jellybean chapter 1 . 3/5
:D I love your work
| Strangedubspirit chapter 1 . 2/2
I love this! It's really interesting and different.
| LK chapter 1 . 10/30/2013
Azkaban 终于看到了一个熟悉的词 换成英文版的哈利波特 读起来好艰难...
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/6/2013
Very short, but very nice; I like the observation on people admitting what is wrong; in modern fanfics, HPMOR (Harry Potter and the Methods of Rationality, by Less Wrong) has a note from Quirrel that Severus Snape is a walking disaster, but at least he knows he's a walking disaster - this rings a bell.
Given that Severus ended up all by himself in an afterlife that he's decided he's suited to, I'm also reminded of The Hall of Heroes by Pavonis Mons, wherein Severus is given a choice of afterlives, and chooses the one without his companions.
Whenever you choose to continue it, I'll be waiting for the sequel to The Birthday Present.
| OspreyEmblem chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
| sevispamprinyoualways chapter 1 . 5/3/2013
Severus never felt Lily
Put her hand upon his willy
And she never rubbed lotion
Into the middle of his scrotum.
| PSay chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
I really liked this little story. It is sad to think that anyone's life would be so bad that Purgatory would be better. thanks for writing. I look forward to more of these little stories. pms
| MuggleCreator chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
| Librasmile chapter 1 . 9/13/2012
Okay this wasn't just lovely - it twinkled! ( In the BEST sense ) ) And I bet the cake was chocolate with vanilla frosting. It WAS wasn't it? Unh huh. I KNEW it * smiles smugly *
Now THIS was the peaceful rest I could imagine for our Sev. And my heart gave a little squeeze when I read that the angel agreed that he had real grievances. Nice not to have feel crazy!
What a lovely bitter-but-only-a-little-and-mostly-sweet confection of a story!
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
It was quite interesting to hear his twisted, self-absorbed point of view until the silliness with the cake at which point, you lost your own plot. Waste of time. At least, it was mercifully short.
| pixileanin chapter 1 . 3/2/2012
A perfect reflection for and imperfect man. I loved this tone; it was so Snape. A real pleasure to read. I might spend a little time in Gluttony too, just to share the cake!
| TheOneThatOnceWas chapter 1 . 2/24/2012
The first sentence drew me in. The last made me smile. I think we all wonder what it would be like for Snape after death, and purgatory - as here nor there as it is - fits.
| kitt46 chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
I really liked this story.
All the best, kitt
| AllegroAssai chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
This was simply brilliant. Very, very clever.
And Severus would definitely think this: "Yes, he was much better off here than in Azkaban, or worse yet, Hogwarts."
| kalo beng chapter 1 . 11/28/2011
Methinks that his complicity in the deaths of Charity Burbage and Emmeline Vance will be earning him an eternal stay in a dimension much, much warmer, and much much harder on the very sensitive parts of his body than Purgatory.