Reviews for Seddie Con Queso
01110011100001111 chapter 2 . 8/20/2011
This was fun up until Spencer started teaching Freddie how to walk in heels... then it got hilarious! That Spencer... he's got some secrets doesn't he? If his bedroom could talk it might have a strange tale or two to share. xD Great scene!

LOL... everyone giving Freddie hell with all the pickup lines was funny too, although borderline cruel... I got the impression that he might have cried if it went on any further.

Even with all this silliness, I like how you muscled in some winning romantic chemistry between Sam and Freddie.

Best thing though? Sam's costume. :D
01110011100001111 chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
lol, this was so clever and enjoyably goofy. I liked Freddie's proposal logic.
Hannah Cha chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
Name your fish Fladoodle!
highunicorns chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
This is cute, but the bolding of the words threw me off the story.

Great job however.
Pixaria chapter 2 . 6/14/2010
Wait how old are they again? I need to be sure.
Pixaria chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
Cool story
Tvshowobsessed2 chapter 2 . 6/7/2010
Lol. Another amazing story! I know it's a 100 word challenge, but this half about the party would make a very interesting story... :) just puttin it out there. Lol

keep writing awesomeness! ]
Panda Hallows chapter 2 . 2/27/2010
There is so much I loved about this entire thing that I'm sure I'd get cut off by the character thingy. The costumes, the heels and the pick up lines, along with the little hint of something more between Seddie.

I can so see Spencer knowing how to rock some heels. This is so Sami's fantasy brought to writing XD

I wish I could make this longer, but I'm sleepy and my brain isn't working so well.

I do love everything that you write! You know this of course my dear! :D

You so should write more short stories, or a novel length fic.

I'll think up some more words you can work with tomorrow and send them to you.

:D
Panda Hallows chapter 1 . 2/27/2010
oh snaps! This was so cute and fun! They are just so goofy as adults! I love your versions of them so so much dude! I'll read the next one in a second! Great job dear! ;D
thefbm chapter 2 . 2/21/2010
Oh man, this was comedy gold! I love the whole exchange between Spencer and Freddie! Nice melons, and Adam Lambert's paper shredder, haha loved it!

Really, my favorite moment is the pick up lines, poor Freddie in a melon
thefbm chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
Haha, Loved it!

When they syarted playing my first thoughts were,'hmm... this would be a good way for Freddie to propose to Sam.' Then of course, Freddie throws down the purple box, and I'm like who called it.

"You know it's not really gambling, when you're betting on a sure thing." Squeel! heh heh, one of the very few moments I'd squeel.
Lanter chapter 2 . 1/30/2010
“Just go home and write your Dork Universe Fanfiction”

“Nice melons.”

“Well at least I don’t look like I got caught in Adam Lambert’s paper shredder.”

“Thank you, Ma’am.”

LOLOL! Every one of those lines slayed me.

This was original and funny, plus the “Camp” party is absolutely something I could envision the characters participating in. You definitely put a smile on my face :0 Excellent job.
cupcakeslam23 chapter 2 . 1/24/2010
To tell you the truth, I'm quite disappointed that there was no witty-banter-disclaimer, as I enjoy them very much. Sigh.

Anyway, hi Luna, how's it going?

This was funny and cheesy and even more ridiculous than the last one.

The pick-up lines completely cracked me up. There were even a few I had never heard before.

I loved that Spencer was teaching Freddie how to walk in heels and that Carly was too disturbed to know why Spencer knew how(his secret cross-dressing porn career, obviously).

I liked Freddie being bold, like Spencer said, once he was in a dress. XD

Sam would totally be an awesome Supergirl, I could see that as canon for cure.

This was great and I look forward to more if you decide to do them. :)

~C.
yay chapter 2 . 1/24/2010
Actually, the spanish word for cheesy is cursi (With cheese is con queso), anyways, the fic is pretty darn good!
JamesTheGreater chapter 2 . 1/24/2010
Hilarious!

Spencer teaching Freddie how to walk was strangely believable.

Favorite quote: "Got something on your chin there, Sergeant Smooth"

And I agree that Jennette would make a stellar supergirl.

This Seddie Con Queso continuation is a great idea. We all need a little bit more cheese in our lives.

Word Bank:

marshmallow

sewing circle

instantaneous

nugget

anaconda

surplus

fairground

eclipse

pumpkin

crescendo

New Mexico

alternating

illegitimate

eternal

tea kettle

epic

teeth

untrimmed

isosceles

(Chosen out of various random pages of random books)
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