Reviews for Matchmakers and Misunderstandings
RainIsMyFavouriteColour chapter 2 . 8/30/2015
This was so enjoyable to read! I really liked it :D
damons-hot-as-hell chapter 2 . 7/28/2014
oh ow i soo totally want more
YueClemes chapter 2 . 8/13/2013
OMG plz continue this one D: ima w8ting a next chapter * sob *
Krim chapter 2 . 1/15/2013
This is so amazing, wahhhhh. Even unfinished I am glad you wrote and shared such a gr8 fic. 3
doriichusan chapter 2 . 12/2/2012
the story was great i think you should do part 3 next!_
FH14 chapter 2 . 1/4/2012
I know its been, like, two years since this was posted but I still wish this story would get continued. I absolutely adore it!
DarkDreamer2009 chapter 2 . 8/13/2011
thats it? I was really hoping there was more. i love your story but if that just it then im kinda of disappointed. Its really a good story, though.
Kay chapter 2 . 3/9/2011
Great story!

Just wanted to let you know in the 4th paragraph is it supposed to be "Sure, the PITCHER could still be terrified into submission..."?
aureus yarara chapter 2 . 9/19/2010


that's it?


it's TOO GOOD.

Crap. I shouldn't have read this before going to sleep before a big exam... I'll be up all night pondering the _posibilities_.




Mihashi clutched the bottom of his shirt."I- just. Um." He looked at Abe, blushing desperately, and then started looking around, avoiding his gaze. "D-do you think y-you could," he paused, eyes clenched shut, his heart beating 100km/h, "like, um, that is- er"

Abe had had enough."SAY IT ALREADY!" he shouted.

Mihashi flinched, his hands holding tighter and twisting his shirt beyond repair."...kiss me?" he finished in his tiny, wavering voice, and then peeked one eye open, testing the waters. This was possibly the single bravest thing he'd ever done.

Abe was struck speechless. His stomach had fallen to his feet, leaving a hollow feeling behind. He opened his mouth and then closed it again, not knowing what to say. The blood rushed in his ears, and he couldn't pay attention, his mind totally blank. "W-wha..?"

Mihashi could see that things were going south rapidly and tried to hit verbal backspace. "Ah- er- no, just- forget it... I-I'm sorry."

But his catcher was finally finishing rebooting, and was now staring at him like he'd just told him he was from Pluto. "Why?" he asked, desperately trying to understand.

It all came to that, really.

Mihashi gathered his guts. He inhaled, trying to calm himself down. Abe hadn't outright refused, puched him, blown a fuse or otherwise expressed total digust, right? So there was hope, right? "T-to figure it o-out." He took another deep breath and looking Abe straight in the eye as if to prove he was being serious, added: "What I f-feel for you, I me-mean."




And I came up with, like, 10 different scenarios already.

Dayum, good ficcage inspires people. PLEASE TAKE ME OUT OF MY MISERY. WRITE MOAR. chapter 2 . 7/12/2010
Okay. I think I've left a comment for you about this before, but I'm not entirely certain. So I'm doing it again. I LOVE THIS FIC. Are you going to write any more?

"This is what confuses me."

THIS. THIS. THIS. This has haunted me ever since I first read it. This line, this scenario, this whole dynamic turns my brain to mush and makes me want to imagine new stories that revolve around such a relationship. I am desperate to see that first kiss as you would write it here.

If you need some prodding and encouragement, THIS IS IT. Please, for the love of Tajima write more of this! I am 100% behind you.


aki chapter 2 . 7/7/2010
I loved this! I guess this is as finished as the story's going to get, but what there is is great. I liked the pacing and you really nailed how Mihashi gets on Abe's nerves but manages to be endearing at the same time. (And lol, Tajima and his arcane knowledge of porn.)
Tiamat Atardecer chapter 2 . 7/7/2010
So sweet! :) I really like the way you describe their awkwarness and confusion. They're so cute!

Cannot wait to read the next chapter :).
IOTR chapter 2 . 6/26/2010
"A cup of pudding could perplex Mihashi given the right circumstances."


Great story so far. I like how you wrote their turmoil and awkwardness.
that tanned idiot chapter 2 . 6/21/2010
GAH! this story is really amazing and interesting, I hope that you continue :))
ibuberu chapter 2 . 6/13/2010
This is pretty wonderful! Will be looking forward to the next installment (:
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