|Reviews for Unwanted Situations|
| Black Rose of Twilight chapter 13 . 5/9
This story was really good and has great bones, but it really lacks in character development, and basic grammar. Also, Spelling was a huge issue. Saiyaman not Saiyanman. Tuffles not Tuples, and a few other things like that. I don't want to discourage you, I want you to be the best writer you can, and attention to details will make that happen. See if you can get someone to Beta for you. It will help a overall, good work.
| MiraiGohanFTW chapter 13 . 3/21/2013
Why couldnt you make Erasa and Gohan get married? Oh, whatever. This fanfic is still awesome, though! I hope you make more like these! GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN NNNNNNNNNNN!
| Jrik23 chapter 13 . 8/19/2012
I never even realized that you finished the story until now. I was looking into what stories I had reviewed in the past when I came across this one. I am pleased with the way that you finished the story. It feels a little rushed towards the end but I can see why you did it. I enjoyed this story a lot. It would be nice to have a sequel. With their daughter fulfilling the role she was intended for. Oh...the drama that would ensue...
| AnimeFreak505 chapter 10 . 6/19/2012
It's fucking probably dumbass
Sorry that just bugged me it was a great story
| mjmusiclover chapter 13 . 4/24/2012
wow, just really beautiful, it's so well writen :D
| SpringCherryBlossom chapter 7 . 12/9/2010
...why in the HELL did they just tell Videl(aka devil). OMG you going to make this a G/V aren't you! !
| librarycat9 chapter 13 . 6/4/2010
Thanks for the story!
| KickAssV chapter 12 . 3/6/2010
Wow, never expected Vegeta to take responsibility for his actions and especially in the way he did (delivering the baby lol). Such a unique story! It just sux how Erasa's social life may be ruined by all this but on the plus side, Gohan isn't pregnant anymore! :) Update soon!
| Dreamer E.V chapter 12 . 3/5/2010
Yay Tarble! I hope to see more of him in the story. Also, loved the idea that Vegeta delivered the the baby.
| GohanSSJ2x chapter 11 . 3/5/2010
well this is an interesting story so far i've never read a mpeg story before but how is the baby coming out?
| librarycat9 chapter 11 . 3/5/2010
We must be getting close...
| KickAssV chapter 10 . 3/3/2010
I thought the second half of the chapter with Goten in it was so cute and useful (well, at least for Gohan and Videl... lol). Loved the chapter! :)
| librarycat9 chapter 10 . 3/3/2010
little brothers are so annoyingly useful... (giggle)
| KickAssV chapter 9 . 3/2/2010
Never thought I'd praise any story that has a pregnant guy, but here I am! lol Awesome story, but I can't help but wonder how ur going to continue the story now since u practically did summed up the whole buu saga in one chapter... Update soon! :)
| librarycat9 chapter 9 . 3/1/2010
... that was... strange... interesting, but strange... lol I am glad that he doesn't have to be healed to keep the baby now...