|Reviews for What was she thinking?|
| suspensegirlinc chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
*sighs* oh my goodness. I'm sorry it took so long for me to finally get around to reading your fics, but I'm kinda glad it did. *shakes head* Like, WOW. I mean, *sighs* you've got a good idea - definitely. But um, in nice terms? You need to practice writing BETTER. Your commas and general punctuation is in need of repair, as is your sense of what is IN character and what is SO not. Also, more details. Come on, if we want JUST dialogue we'll watch a movie and look in the background on occasion. *sighs & shakes head* I'm really sorry if this comes off really bad and rude or what not, but you said you wanted me as your beta and at this stage it's going to probably come out mean until you get better. It's for your own good. Trust me. Though the idea really is good. I've had a thought for it before too, but I've never seen anyone actually go for it. heh. very creative. ;p
| LetMeIn1812 chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
I really felt that too. The limo is not something I take lightly either! LOL.
What a great fic just out of that one scene a great job with it too!
I loved that Blair shared Chuck's outrage at such a forward comment! :)
| Guardian Izz chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
Sigh... if only
if only Chuck was THIS in character,
If only we actually DID get the real chuck and Blair SEXUAL essense and PASISON and not just some lie baout Hot angry sex... Ugh
If only... etc.
then maybe I would sitll watch the stupid show - but alas
Great job, loved this little shorty