Reviews for I can't help but wonder
EmmettCullen'sGurl1998 chapter 6 . 4/13/2010
i love this story too! ur a really good writer! update soon!

emett's soon-2-be-wife
Efficient Vixen chapter 5 . 2/6/2010
This is an excellent chapter
Efficient Vixen chapter 4 . 2/6/2010
Thanks for the back story fill in
Efficient Vixen chapter 3 . 2/6/2010
Much better formatting - really good plot
Efficient Vixen chapter 2 . 2/6/2010
the formatting is tough to get through, but the chapter is worth reading
Efficient Vixen chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
Looks good it would help if you broke the dialogue into separate paragrahs
MsLaura chapter 4 . 2/2/2010
This is a good story, although there are a few spelling mistakes, and wrong words with the sentences. But , other than that, its a really cute story, i love the ones about nessie, since all we've read is bella haha ;) , can't wait fer the next one !
BabstheRed chapter 3 . 2/2/2010
I'm liking the story so far. I have only read the first three chapters.

Thank you for changing the format so that it is not just one huge paragraph. It really makes it easier to read. Remember to double check your grammar. There were a couple tiny mistakes.

Keeping going. I can't wait to see where you take this. I love to read about other people's ideas of Jake and Nessie's future.